Undeniably Piqued
she was both sulky and shy ..
like the top of
some remote and obscured
by cloud
high mountain peak shy ..
allowing nothing
but brief glimpses at first ..
and so hard
to reach, but all the effort
they said in
the end, would be worth it ..
it was a shame
though, when afterwards ..
she refused to
let go and spoilt everything ..
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Neville (
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'Pandora'
as our our Poetic, dreamed
ideal...
(another exemplar work
as legacy
of your poetic subtlety's
efficacy)
what variety you've offered us this week, Hyung
thank you!
thank you brother Mek
How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.
I'm told she talks in her sleep 🐭
Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x
nah' its complete fabrication ..... 💜x
Good write, Neville.
The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.
How excruciatingly true .. and if it aint broken why try to asfixiate it Cheers Jez 🙂
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x
How come I missed you till now mistress Fay .. am glad I came back looking .. x
Perhaps everyone has a facade that hides their true nature. It's only when a relationship becomes really comfortable that we find the good or the bad behind it. The question then is how to disentangle from the disagreeable. I think you captured it perfectly.
I think you are absolutely write Bella .. your insight could well be a godsend to those only too eager to dive in head first without considering the likelihood of any dangers that lie beneath the surface ..
and thank you so much for contributing my friend .. such visits are always welcome and greatly appreciated ... Neville
Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there forever.
Difficult to compare a woman to a mountain, but you have done it beautifully. Introduce a few clouds to add to her reticence and the picture clears. Hope you were able to climb off of this one. - Phil A.
Many thanks for taking time to consider my little scribble Phil ..
Some are like that in not letting go but I am sure the one for you is out there and you would not let her go.
Andy
You bet 'cha bill Andy ........... 🐧
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