Undeniably Piqued


Undeniably Piqued


she was both sulky and shy ..

like the top of

some remote and obscured

by cloud

high mountain peak shy ..

allowing nothing

but brief glimpses at first ..

and so hard

to reach, but all the effort

they said in

the end, would be worth it ..

it was a shame

  though, when afterwards ..

she refused to

  let go and spoilt everything ..



  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 19th, 2023 03:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    as our our Poetic, dreamed
    (another exemplar work
    as legacy
    of your poetic subtlety's
    what variety you've offered us this week, Hyung
    thank you!

    • Neville

      thank you brother Mek

    • orchidee

      How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.

      • Neville

        I'm told she talks in her sleep 🐭

      • Christina8

        Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x

        • Neville

          nah' its complete fabrication ..... 💜x

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good write, Neville.
          The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.

          • Neville

            How excruciatingly true .. and if it aint broken why try to asfixiate it Cheers Jez 🙂

          • Fay Slimm.

            Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x

            • Neville

              How come I missed you till now mistress Fay .. am glad I came back looking .. x

            • Bella Shepard

              Perhaps everyone has a facade that hides their true nature. It's only when a relationship becomes really comfortable that we find the good or the bad behind it. The question then is how to disentangle from the disagreeable. I think you captured it perfectly.

              • Neville

                I think you are absolutely write Bella .. your insight could well be a godsend to those only too eager to dive in head first without considering the likelihood of any dangers that lie beneath the surface ..

                and thank you so much for contributing my friend .. such visits are always welcome and greatly appreciated ... Neville

              • MendedFences27

                Oh, to climb to the mountaintop and find there is no way down. Stuck there forever.
                Difficult to compare a woman to a mountain, but you have done it beautifully. Introduce a few clouds to add to her reticence and the picture clears. Hope you were able to climb off of this one. - Phil A.

                • Neville

                  Many thanks for taking time to consider my little scribble Phil ..

                • Goldfinch60

                  Some are like that in not letting go but I am sure the one for you is out there and you would not let her go.


                  • Neville

                    You bet 'cha bill Andy ........... 🐧

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