The darkened cave,
With the aura of death
Forbids with its heart:
“Do not enter me.”
The trip within
Fills one’s heart with dread;
The walls constricting
and the cavern dark.
But at the end of the darkness
Through the journey of fear,
There sits a pool
Of bright, cool water.
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Author:
Rael (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Troubled souls bury themselves deep for protection. Sometimes, treading carefully in one's heart can lead to a beautiful discovery of heart. To find someone you can trust to enter the soul's cavern, to uncover both the good and bad, can be a difficult yet rewarding process.
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Comments3
The color of this poem is Pantone PMS 2965, or #00263e.
I like the way you presented a point w a certain clarity w confident unpretentious verse.
Nice write. Good Read
is this
referencing a biblical cave
or Plato's cave
then again one is a facsimile
of the other..
(thanks for sharing)
You may not believe it, but there is actually no double entendre in this poem. Glad you found something within it that I didn't see though!
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