A Trip

Tristan Robert Lange

I wish you and I took a trip

Beyond the common to the radical.

I wish that and state it emphatical;

And no, that was not a slip.

 

You see reality, I see a cartoon

With all the characters exposed,

While the villains are all deposed

Before it reaches high noon.

 

So, come, baby, come to this place

And I will not be here any longer

For this hell-cell could not be stronger

And I now need my own space.

 

Go, now, go and never come back.

For I am done with your excuses

And will no longer accept abuses.

That is, friends, my solemn pact!

  • Author: Tristan Robert Lange (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 22nd, 2023 19:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wish you and I took a trip\r\nBeyond the common to the radical.\r\nI wish that and state it emphatical\r\nAnd no, that was not a slip,.\r\n\r\nYou see reality, I see a cartoon\r\nWith all the characters exposed\r\nWhile the villains are all deposed\r\nBefore it reaches high noon.\r\n\r\nSo, come, baby, come to this place\r\nAnd I will not be here any longer\r\nFor this hell-cell could not be stronger\r\nAnd I now need my own space.\r\n\r\nGo, now, go and never come back.\r\nFor I am done with your excuses\r\nAnd will no longer accept abuses\r\nThat is, friends, my solemn pact!
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Comments3

  • AlitaOpal

    I wish we had a chance,
    To dance,
    Soul gazing,
    Entranced,
    Could you ever forgive me,
    For being a free spirit,
    My heart beats,
    But I can never give it,
    One more chance,
    My mind is tripping,
    Tricking..
    Memories flicking..
    You and I where we?
    To the state of oblivion
    We could never be
    Fantasy?
    I wish I could be..
    Less than contrary..
    Rather a best friend..
    To hold you..
    And tell you it'll be ok..
    Till you wake up and realise..
    Only you can say,
    Have your way,
    You got to call it,
    Words are spells..
    So go spell..
    I'll see you in the happy papers..

    🌹🔥💯

  • AlitaOpal

    Your poem got me on a tangent, it's been a while.. you still got grit 💯🌹🔥

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Amazing! Rock on!!!



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