Remember me yesterday
For today I am here now
And tomorrow that is yet to come
To you I am unknown
Like drifting sands
I never rest
Or settle where I want
I go where the currents
Of time take me
Forever, on and on
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Author:
Saxon Crow (
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My comments on the poem “Drifting sands” by Saxon Crow
You speak of the currents taking you along. See the poem “The brook” by Tennyson.
“I chatter, chatter, as I flow
To join the brimming river,
For men may come and men may go,
But I go on forever.”
--Alfred Tennyson (1709-1892) : “The brook.”
As a poet, you go on forever…
Soman Ragavan. 24 May, 2023. //
Many thanks for your kind response Soman. I have just read The Brook. A lovely piece of poetry. It's shameful to admit but I very rarely read any poetry. Clearly my loss!
May that journey never end and be filled with joy and love.
Andy
The journey is the journey GF. And there's a line for a poem. See you tomorrow!
Good write SC.
It reminds me - I can never find 'tomorrow'. When it gets here, it's always 'today'. Doh! Strange that! lol.
I can't say I know more than a smattering of Tennyson myself.
It is a bit confusing isn't Orchi. What's ridiculous is that we try to measure it! I thought Tennyson was a type of saw
Oh lol - tenon saw! 24 hours to a day. How did you spend that extra second we had a few years ago? Hope you didn't spend it all at once! heehee.
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