Roses Don't Hurt

horrorautumnpoet

Life is a rose, and then the wind blows.

All I know

is that it's beautiful on top. 

Like a breeze flowing through a cloud,

or down on the tree. 

Gathering some sticks and leaves

Varying from the rose, it's the thorn that's twisting

Seemingly ETERNAL. 

  • Author: horrorautumnpoet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 27th, 2023 03:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: Midnight writing session. Short new little bestie poem atm. Psychological tormented through unexpected trauma. symbolically clearing a path to righteousness
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 6
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  • Soman Ragavan

    My comments on the poem "Roses don’t hurt” by horrorautumnpoet
    The wind blows and blows away some petals. Just as with our lives. But, we have no choice but to struggle on. The rose has a short lifespan. Ours is longer, but might be extinguished at any moment. Both the rose and our life are fragile. So, we must make the most of it. Poetry lasts forever, so we must compose poetry. The thorn seems twisting and always looking to prick us. It does a good job protecting the rose, however. Perhaps that is why it is there, as a guardian. Soman Ragavan. 27 May, 2023. //
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    • horrorautumnpoet

      Wow! i think you get it.. thanks for commenting! so interesting to read what you added on and flawlessly carry it over into it all.

    • Bobby O

      The thorn eternal , is that maybe representative of the ubiquitous force that we may expect ot to forever be our foe and suggests no rest for those enjoined to clear a righteous path?

      • horrorautumnpoet

        Yes but exempt the part about righteous path. nothing about evil or good ways. That is more of a reflection bestowed from unexpected trauma..
        sometimes it goes away sometimes it hurts longer. if it would have interpreted a righteous path i would say sometimes its tethered to us but that was not my intent.

        • horrorautumnpoet

          if it was a force, it wouldnt seem... it would just be eternal pain and suffering like hell or whatever you think.

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