I walk along the golden sand
Just looking out to sea,
The waves lap gently at my feet
They seem to speak to me.
They tell me of the life I’ve lead
The good things and the bad,.
My life has had much more joy
Than those of which I’m sad
The water reaches out for me
To show my life that’s been,
And still there’s time for me to live
To see wonders never seen.
So as I walk towards my end
Still many years to go,
I walk beside that glorious sea
With joy in what I know.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 30th, 2023 01:17
- Comment from author about the poem: Onwards in glory and wonder.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
Onwards in our 5 millionth and one year - yes, you and I very old?! lol.
So true Orchi but we are older than that.
Andy
50 million and one years old?
Beautiful poem and wonderful message. That is how I feel when I look upon our vast Lake Michigan. Cannot be sad when looking at such things.
Thank you Christina and so true we just cannot be sad when we are with Nature's beauty.
Andy
I like the simple but well-written delivery and the message. It feels nice to read out loud too, which I think is a good test of a poem
So kind Jeremy, thank you.
Andy
A wonderful poem of reflection where the balance is in favor of the good. Very upbeat Gold.
Much appreciated soren, thank you.
Andy
A beautiful rhythm, that has painted a serene scene in such a brutal world.
Bravo Andy, for sharing such an uplifting four stanzas.
I hope that all is well!
Thank you Ben, serenity can be found in this world.
Andy
A wonderful outlook on life. A poem that many will enjoy, understand, and appreciate. Well written with a heart. Loved it. - Phil A,
Most kind Phil, thank you.
Andy
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