The Rose Garden

tattooedreverie

The careful creation of the garden of roses

Is not always seen by the cultivator.

It’s in the strength of the roots

That lie deep within the warm, giving earth

That show the strength of the plant;

And the endless care of the grower.

Both plant and planter understand

The desire to bloom.

  • Author: Rael (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 31st, 2023 09:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: A little different from my usual, but it's quite alright to challenge yourself. If you can imagine it, this 'garden' of mine is full of vibrant yellow roses. Have a lovely day.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 6
  • Users favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou
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  • tattooedreverie

    The color of this poem is Pantone 16-0237, or #75A14F.

  • Rocky Lagou

    My Lord, this poem is so profound and so nuanced that I feel like it’d take me a week to write a thorough analysis…the craziest part, it’s only an octave (eight lines)! Indeed, any poet can write something semi-profound in a page or two, but the art of brevity takes a true genius. I adore this, the final line is the most revitalizing of conclusions: “Both plant and planter understand / The desire to bloom.”

    • tattooedreverie

      Goodness, I don't know what to say. Thank you! I wasn't feeling very confident posting this, but your words are incredibly kind. I'm so glad it resonated with you.

    • orchidee

      Good write T.



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