My head’s blowin’ up
getting dizzy
My neck’s gettin sore
speak easy
Five senses overloaded
Bees buzzi
Getting tight up
Nip and tucked up
Getting glammed up
Never knowin Wha’
Fathertime brough’
Lemons Crush’d up
Manic, bum’d out
World is botched up
Prez Narci screwed up
Kids is checked out
People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up
It’s English I’m speakin’
Make your mind up
Am I ugly American or holding a torch up or getting kicked out
Graced or tacky
I’m gettin’ snappy
I told ya my thousant story
I’m a dungeon of mystery
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Author:
Parisab (
Offline) - Published: June 12th, 2023 11:08
- Comment from author about the poem: Lyrical rap from three years ago after binging on a lot of rap and hip hop: received a blessing from a couple actual rappers first
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 20
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Teddy.15.
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Comments14
'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what it was originally intended for- I really appreciate your read and kind comments.
that's a rap .. for sure ............. 🙂
Thanks for the props! Great to see you back, poet friend.
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm of my first 13 guesses and I’m way too shy to spit about getting glammed up
Props Lady P, Props!
So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your cognitive shifting!
That was very good, I like the flow, I can see you reading that at a rap session…
Thank you for the read and your comment-I tried to enter that realm with the respect it deserves-I’m looking forward to reading more of your poems
Great job, you have a wonderful flow.
Thanks, sir!
Superb, and very relatable I don't know what midlife really means but as a woman at the gorgeous age of 49 I'm feeling this, I still feel like an 18 year old though. Loved this it obviously has all your character painted in the lines. The language made me chuckle... 🤗
LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
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