Not my world but my home

Poetic Dan

My home flew away and its been gone for over ten days.

We're all in a world of our own that no one can replace, but within it you can be lucky to find a safe place

Nobody's life is easy and struggles are a must, walls can give you safety yet the heart needs more than stuff!

A connection that can be felt and not seen, something that makes you want to be better than yesterday's dreams.

Where the feeling of heaven becomes part of your soul, knowing there's a partner the other side of your whole

My emotions can look erratic, yet we was each given this gift. To flow deeply in every vibration, riding each wave that wants to hit.

You rarely find real gratitude until you lost or let go it.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2023 12:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: You never know how much you miss something until its gone! Luckily she will return and had to see but love really is the best remedy... always appreciated Much peace and respect
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BlessedbyGod

    I'm sure that you miss her very much Dan,
    It will be the sweetest reunion when she returns to you

    • Poetic Dan

      Good morning my friend thank you so much and have a splendid week!

      • BlessedbyGod

        Thank you so much Dan, you too

      • Goldfinch60

        That home will come back and all will be fine Dan.

        Andy

        • Poetic Dan

          Tomorrow my friend and can't wait!
          Always appreciate your time

        • Caring dove

          A good writing Dan ) love is important in life ..nice rhyming in your poem

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you...I don't write about it enough anymore... been dark for to long and I shall hopefully now change that pattern!
            Always find it easier in a rhyme....oo that inspired a thought lol got to go write it.
            Thanks

          • L. B. Mek

            ' walls can give you safety
            yet the heart
            needs more than stuff!

            A connection
            that can be felt and not seen
            something, that makes you
            want
            to be better than yesterday's dreams.

            Where the feeling of heaven
            becomes part of your soul
            knowing, there's a partner
            anchoring*
            the other side of your whole'
            Brilliant!!!
            (breathtakingly beautiful
            stay blessed, my cherished friend)

            • Poetic Dan

              Always a pleasure my good friend! Truly



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