Good Mourning

Ok Waleed


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what a day to die 

everyday seems like a gift 

I do not care though

  • Author: Ok Waleed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 16th, 2023 08:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: Quick traditional haiku while I sit in a sauna
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 9
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  • 2781

    Really?

    • Ok Waleed

      Yes, human life is no more significant than algae on a pond…

      • 2781

        That's disrespecting the work of his hands.

        • Ok Waleed

          Eh

          • 2781

            Algae is not man
            But both are part of Gods plan
            Man has dominion.


            • Ok Waleed

              I see them as equal but thanks for input

              • Goldfinch60

                Our life on this world is just a moment in time of our true life.

                Andy

              • Ok Waleed

                My wife is more positive… she says even algae has significance to the pond

              • Goldfinch60

                Every day is certainly a gift and we must enjoy every one of them.

                Andy



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