What A Day.

Goldfinch60



What a day!

Everything fell into place,

Nothing was planned

But our life was cemented,

Our eternity rings arrived,

Arrived early,

Earlier than expected.

We were going to a meeting,

A meeting of the Summer Solstice,

I asked the leader if he would bless the rings,

He agreed with so much pleasure.

We went to the meeting

And sat in a circle,

A circle of light.

The water was in the middle,

And a circle of flowers by its side.

The service started

And the positivity of life

Spread over us all

As we welcomed the Summer Solstice.

A rose petal was given from us all,

Given to the water,

Showing our love,

Our love for our world.

We meditated and brought thoughts,

Brought thoughts to mind

Of the sun that filled our lives,

Filled our lives in many ways.

The ceremony came to an end

And then it happened,

The leader then blessed us

And blessed our rings

Ensuring our life would go on,

Go on to eternity.

And then a strange thing happened,

There in the circle of flowers

There were roses,

Just two roses,

We were given them with love

And those two roses are there,

There in our life as we go forward,

Go forward in our beautiful life,

Our beautiful life together.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 21st, 2023 01:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Mary and I have now committed ourselves to each other and when the rings arrived early other things just fell into place so we know all will be wonderful in our future together.
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 10
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    I thought it was today, 21st, the Solstice. I might get caught up in that yesterday / today / tomorrow business.
    I dunno what day is it anyway. No change there then! lol.

  • David Wakeling

    Congratulations a beautiful poem and and ceremony.Von Karajan is my favourite conductor

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind David, thank you.

      Andy

    • Laura🌻

      Dear Andy,
      Yes…
      “What A Day”, what a day, WHAT a day❣️
      A special occasion indeed!

      Congratulations to you and Mary.

      Blessings to you both.

      Laura🌻

      • Goldfinch60

        Very much appreciated Laura. Thank you.

        Andy

      • Accidental Poet

        Gotta love it when everything just falls into place as it was meant to be. Congratulations to both of you. 🌹🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          You certainly have AP, and it did on this day.

          Andy



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