Is positivity really a thing!

Poetic Dan

Positivity is it really a thing.

Well if you start repeating it again and again
Getting faster and faster, until it sounds like a train
Let go and you'll think it's gone from your brain
Yet we all know the subconscious rules this game
What we think and what is, are not always the same

This is the way!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 23rd, 2023 07:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Wrote this yesterday and today's definitely been a test of these thoughts! Keep up the write, always appreciate your time
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  • orchidee

    Well, it's not a 'thing' as a cup of tea is - being completely random there!
    Make that a pot of tea and a slice of cake each, for both of us, and we'll sit down and discuss this!

    • Poetic Dan

      Well that sounds delightful good sir, I'll be round at noon! Yes for 2! Or. 3 if Fido still kicking!

    • peto

      Is it really a thing?
      You sir
      Are positivity personified
      Inspiring

      • Poetic Dan

        Stop it.... oh go on then! I'll take this one and keep it in my chest as today was truly a test of my inner limits!
        Truly appreciate your time my friend
        Much peace and respect

      • Goldfinch60

        My way in life and my life are always positive, it is the way I am and I hope some of it is seen in you Dan.

        Andy

        • Poetic Dan

          I choose it to be from now on my friend! Grateful for your spirit to keep up this in my mind and shall forever try!

          Always appreciate your time

        • Neville



          that is indeed absolutely the way .. the way to go & all that jazz as they say .. safe journey Dan .. Neville

          • Poetic Dan

            Cheers my man and do love a bit of jazz!

          • L. B. Mek

            so true!
            feigning positivity is a quick way
            to tripping ourselves
            better, to let it come naturally
            sense its presence
            and fight the need to grab at it
            let it marinate
            and when the time's right, we'll
            sip, a little at a time
            every time, making sure there's plenty left
            for those bleak storm winds of life..
            a great right dear Poet
            thought provoking indeed

            • Poetic Dan

              I'll definitely guilty of trying to hard rather than build it and it will come!



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