The stars trail a path,
I cannot follow
Shackled to the earth
But that never stopped us.
From wondering
Wishing,
To follow the eternally
Burning guide lights,
That would remain
Long after, I finish this mortal sentence
Is this punishment?
To always look up
And ache
Is it just our minds
Lusting after something inconceivable,
Or is it truly something more?
Our soul acheing to go,
To a place only it remembers.
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Author:
Stargirl (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 23rd, 2023 08:27
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Comments4
Fantastic debut Nia
Bit of a bowie vibe
Look forward to reading more from you
Thank you!
This gives a very dramatic Effect and makes its way into the readers hearts and mind
Thank you so much
an excellent introduction to your ink my friend .. very much enjoyed .. and welcome to MPS .. I sincerely hope you will be both happy and comfortable here ..
All Good Things, Neville 🙂
Thank you
Listing after something inconceivable /
That pretty much explains my mood every time I see Halle Berry/ but I digress. It’s a nice piece and I will read allyour more
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