Crying

peto

She brightens up the darkest room 

Was blessed before she left the womb

Stood at the altar with her groom 

The girl who cries alone

 

She touches other people's lives 

Disarms them of their guns and knives 

Makes husbands run home to their wives 

The girl who cries alone 

 

Her heart beats to the sweetest tune 

Ask for her help receive the moon 

And nothing looks like changing soon 

The girl who cries alone 

 

She breezes through her busy day

An optimist who finds the way 

Not worried there's a price to pay

The girl who cries alone 

 

She has the wings she needs to fly 

Though clipped them for that special guy

One day she'll know the reason why 

The girl who's tears I dry

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 24th, 2023 01:17
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • 2781

    Another hit by our yet? to be awarded.

    • peto

      Cheers mucker
      Your support and encouragement are truly appreciated
      Ta much

      • 2781

        Good song lyrics.
        Good work.

      • Bobby O

        Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
        26. Nice job.

        • peto

          Thank you Bobby
          Been a bit since I managed a marathon
          Truly appreciate your visit and view
          Much obliged

        • Christina8

          This is so powerful and if I'm not mistaken, I've seen this one before and I had the same reaction to it then. Thanks for continuing to post these, my favorites of all!!

          • peto

            Not mistaken Christina
            On the ball as always
            My gratitude
            Thanks for reading and encouraging

          • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

            A great poem 🙂

            Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem

            She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad

            Nice way to tell a story of a girl

            • peto

              Thanks Violet
              I very much appreciate the read
              And uplifting comments
              Extremely grateful



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