Roses named Honor and Grand Dame,
are blush and prickly this summer
The scent reminds you that the peaches need picking and will be succulent in their sweet and tender way
The Pomegranate tree is still shedding her orange skirt, worth a thousand rubies in the wind
Summers are oblivious to the sweat and blood of the gardner digging deep to soften their beds and undisturbed rest
One small turtle is basking
in the sun before swimming slowly in the fountain and imagining his love for the waterlilies
while feeding from their roots
in a seemingly gentle way
The garden’s lizard swiftly steals
the dead bees who took
secret life powder
from flower to flower
All in different speeds and colors with the intention to die and to bloom
For summers rise to feast
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I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers toward a chosen secret known only by the magic in your mind. Success , guided missile on the target success, enhanced w speed control voyeurs embrace and enjoy cuz slow beauty is fun to watch.
Thank you for taking the time to visit my words with your sophisticated sight, esteemed literary peer!
Hmmm. It’s a first place Team and maybe I could be first off the bench? Lately, it’s been two minutes at a time v
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this is nothing short of amazing and I rarely use the A word these days ..
bravo my fine literary friend .. N
I value your kind comments on my poems greatly and welcome your insight of all types, poet friend
I wish I could see through eyes like that
A true poet with deep vision
The scent of roses and peaches add to this great visual
"Secret life power " line is stunning also
Magical stroll
Thank you for visiting this poem-I appreciate your sophisticated insight.
Brilliant!
Poesy's verdant ink, purposed
to blossom a garden of words..
beautiful
Thank you esteemed poet peer! Nature gives great lessons of dialectics of life and death, Beaty and decay. I attempt to capture that in words and I’m relieved that this poem spoke to you-
Thank you for your graceful visit!
Interesting and nicely expressed poem )) good writing
I appreciate your visit and comments.
Your words fill the page with clarity, beauty and life (and death as the cycle). Fantastic flow and captured essence of summers birth. - Michael
Thanks for visiting-it looks like our poems spoke of similar themes
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as you. Peace
An exquisite look at a true summers feast 💖
Your charming visit and helpful input is always welcome, friend…
This is vibrant refreshing and totally amazing love the words like an artist palette all the colors could brighten up any mood Thanks so much
I’m glad that you enjoyed this garden walk-looking forward to reading more Sunsetmet
Tremendous imagery and use of senses. I love it.
Thank you for visiting and now we are in winter…
exquisitely surreal
Thank you for noticing the unintended surrealism-you too have that in your poetry…
Neruda and Paz influences,
amazing surrealism like paintings
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