I look from the balcony
And there before me is the sea,
A glorious sight to see,
The mysteries of its wonder
Enthralling me,
As the gentle waves come towards me
Carrying new messages to my heart.
My lover with me
In our glorious place,
That has become our haven,
Our haven of absolute love.
I look out further,
As far as my eyes will see,
And I see eternity
Waiting for my lover and I
As we journey towards it,
Together in our such deep love.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: June 25th, 2023 01:07
- Comment from author about the poem: This is our place of beautiful times.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 15
Comments5
Good write Gold.
They won't 'find another me' for quality of singing! lol.
Thanks Orchi.
I like your place of beautiful times ..
Thank you Neville, it is wonderful.
Andy
"In our glorious place", how beautiful! Thank you for sharing!
My absolute pleasure Liz.
Andy
An eternity indeed dear Andy. 🤗
It certainly is Teddy. Thank you.
Andy
…’Our haven of absolute love’…
Beautiful words dear Andy.
To be with your lover in your
‘haven of absolute love’ is a blessing indeed.
I’m ecstatic for you and Mary.
Laura🌻
P.S.—Is the top photo the view from your hotel?
Thank you Laura, we are so very happy.
Yes the picture was from our balcony yesterday morning.
Andy
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