Our Journey To Eternity.

Goldfinch60



 

I look from the balcony 

And there before me is the sea, 

A glorious sight to see, 

The mysteries of its wonder 

Enthralling me, 

As the gentle waves come towards me 

Carrying new messages to my heart. 

My lover with me 

In our glorious place, 

That has become our haven, 

Our haven of absolute love. 

I look out further, 

As far as my eyes will see, 

And I see eternity 

Waiting for my lover and I 

As we journey towards it, 

Together in our such deep love. 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 25th, 2023 01:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is our place of beautiful times.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    They won't 'find another me' for quality of singing! lol.

  • Neville


    I like your place of beautiful times ..

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, it is wonderful.

      Andy

    • LIZ

      "In our glorious place", how beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

      • Goldfinch60

        My absolute pleasure Liz.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        An eternity indeed dear Andy. 🤗

        • Goldfinch60

          It certainly is Teddy. Thank you.

          Andy

        • Laura🌻

          …’Our haven of absolute love’…
          Beautiful words dear Andy.

          To be with your lover in your
          ‘haven of absolute love’ is a blessing indeed.
          I’m ecstatic for you and Mary.

          Laura🌻
          P.S.—Is the top photo the view from your hotel?


          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Laura, we are so very happy.

            Yes the picture was from our balcony yesterday morning.

            Andy



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