Once a smile, now a frown
There's no one left in this town
To dance with anymore
I want loves first kiss
To be everything I wish
Come on knocking at my door
I have fantasies instead
Of hearts I dare not tread
It simply cuts me to my core
I always do feel delight
When you're here within my sight
You are the one I adore
Without your sweet voice
I don't have any choice
I just want you by my side
Like a song without the tune
A summer without June
It's you whom I want to confide
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 25th, 2023 02:27
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Comments8
Ohh, you praise me too much - another poem about me! heehee.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
You are too funny, Steve! Thanks for the read!
I am delighted you have relocated your muse C .. this is really quite special
Thank you, I do appreciate the kind comment!
On the ball Christina
We all need someone to confide in
Turn that frown upside down
Interesting rhyme and style you are developing
Thank you Stevie, compliments always appreciated!! Thanks for your support!
I like your writing 🙂 especially like the last few lines
Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
Dear Christine,
These are my favorite lines:
“You are the one I adore”
“I just want you by my side”
“It's you whom I want to confide”
Beautifully scripted.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
Thank you Laura, it's very appreciated!!
You’re welcome.☺️
May those fantasies become reality Christina.
Andy
Just a bit of fantasy in my life because I'm still married, remember? Thanks for reading, and your reply!
Gorgeous, a complete ride of emotions. ❤️
Thank you so much dear Teddy!
What an achingly beautiful piece. I love your rhymes, too.
Thanks so much, Carly! I had almost forgotten about this one! lol
You’re welcome! ☺️💕
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