As I stand in a field of flowers and inhale the smell of beauty and the feel of freedom with my arms wide open. I feel the warmth from the sun with my eyes closed a gentle wind blows through my hair massaging my head clear down to my toes I can feel the release of unwanted energy being blown away by the winds of change. By billi jo Wilcox 7/30/21~♡~
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You’re standing, smelling , feeling,, bragging you still hit hair, offering no clue as to why that energy was unwanted, and worst of all yiu disrespected your own title never providing insight to the changes you mentioned that are in thevwind, for good, for bad, fir any reason. Give us at least a tiny clue ?But no there just winds of change that your standing around in. It’s a sinless list that goes nowhere and it’s a waste of time to read something that the author didn’t care enough to attach meaning to.
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