Just Desserts and No Pudding

Neville

Just Desserts and No Pudding

 

it is so very true

of course

that I once loved

each inch of you ..

indeed,

everything about

you darling ..

each fresh

and fine new line ..

every single

sculptured curve

and then some ..

and although I did

taste every morsel

and ecstasized 

over every portion ..

in the end

my love, it seems

we both got

what we deserved ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 26th, 2023 00:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: there is no personal message about this poem
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  • Goldfinch60

    True love is very much like that Neville, that ecstasy over every portion is so wonderful.

    Andy

    • Neville



      You have such good taste sir .. thanks, yours truly 🙂

    • orchidee

      Good write N.
      I 'tasted' KP. Tasted like an old trout! Well, looked like one anyway. heehee.

      • Neville



        I swear I saw a red dot on your forehead when I came by to check on you Mr. O .. I would be careful I have heard she wants to turn you into a draught excluder or summat useful ............. 🐭

        • orchidee

          Heehee - but I want pudding now! Aww, why they serve me black pudding?! lol.

        • L. B. Mek

          just desserts, eh?
          too much sweetness, as a curse
          rotting our teeth and emboldening
          our love handles..
          lol
          loving the wordplay, a great write Hyung
          a fun read as well
          (or maybe that's just me)

          • Neville



            Nah' not just you brother M .. we are in the same boat .. and as for love handles .. come on, get a grip my good man ..

            • L. B. Mek

              lol
              I think a decent percentage of my happiness
              comes from just knowing someone like you
              thinks me worthy of your time and uplifting
              support, I cherish the day fate afforded me
              your presence in my life, thank you Hyung
              may you n yours, ever - stay blessed

            • Christina8

              A wonderful poem....so descriptive and brings such fun times to mind.....Great one

              • Neville



                if this little scribble is responsible for bringing fun times to your mind dear C, then the whole thing is worthwhile and I am a happy Brit 🙂

              • Teddy.15

                LOL there is a huge irony I get from your words, no winners in love that's for sure. ❤️ Sometimes just sour grapes. Wonderfully written.

                • Neville



                  Don'tcha just luv sour grapes n cherries ..🍇🍒 Cheers Teddy 🙂

                • Kinsey Peterson

                  i feel as though there is a story behind this that we are not seeing- i'm curious what the love thinks about what occured :))

                  You know it's a good poem when someone wants to turn it into a story.

                  • Neville



                    you are quite write Joan there is a delicious tale that both inspired and underpins this little scribble but of course, a gentleman never tells .. thanks for noticing and for your ongoing support 🙂



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