Psithurism Interludes
One day perhaps
I want
and shall, invite
you, into
an open glass
fronted room
with ocean view
and you
will lay with me
there ..
On top of both
our hastily
discarded robes
and where
beneath a navy
spiralled,
Van Gogh sky ..
You may
choose to watch
and feel
me resurrect
against
the backdrop
of a gentle and oh’
so rhythmic
psithurism ..
Both more than
merely
grateful to a very
welcome breeze ..
Yet still
keen to leave each
of those dead
and drying
orchestral leaves
outside
our deliciously
and deliberately,
unlocked open door ..
Comments5
And this my friend is a really beautiful poem. ❤️
................................................... thank you Teddy ❤️
It's all right for some folks having psithurisms! lol
I've gone nutty - a course said - maybe people should be called 'person-technology hybrids'.
Then it got dafter: 'This sofa could have its own personality'.
They'll put me in padded cell soon, reading that rubbish!
I can very easily arrange for bread & breakfast in such accommodation .. cheers 🙂
Thank you, you PTH, you - that's person-technology hybrid. I thought things were a bit dotty, when the course author said 'Hi Fred' to the sofa (did he?). lol.
Don't these people do any work, or are they in meetings all day, every day?!
And - ya can't beat a bit of Greek!
whispering to my poetic fate
I summon what courage i have
to express these feelings I cherish
symmetry, in that ideal I seek
between your steps within grace
and my ambition to become
that person in your life, entrusted
with your joy and satisfaction,
I won't be so bold as to guarantee
I'll just invite you
to share this dream with me
and pray you'll afford me
the opportunity to showcase
this love for you, i carry
encased in all the hope i can
manifest, my dear
what a way you have with them my friend .. words I mean .. thank you for these fine examples .. N
Such a beautiful poem Neville.
Andy
thanks again Andy ... 💛
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