Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers

Neville

Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers

 

I’m sure

I caught a tiny

glimpse

last night

of what it must

be really like

to not exist ..

Indeed,

to just not be ..

A simple

nothingness

no more or less

stuck in

deep and darkest

space ..

Completely

unaware of zilch ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 30th, 2023 00:38
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  • Bobby O

    That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit that state on occasion but to extend that to a nothingness drives that kerfluffle into a spiritual realm , which of course can be argued as pure logic. But, as an aside, would that have provided insight, in that momentary glimpse , as to what’s the next station? The next subway stop? Could you hint if there’s gonna be lots of beautiful women,? Just asking for a friend v

    • Neville



      I think it was a bad prawn .. cheers

    • 2781

      Sounds like me after about 4pm

      • Neville



        you should pace your self more

        • 2781

          I am what I am..

        • orchidee

          Oh woe, I don't exist hardly at all now, having married KP! It's all 'me, me, me'. That's all she ever says - not to me, but to herself lol. I reply to her 'old trout!'.

          • Neville



            but you are not nothing are you at the moment ..

          • L. B. Mek

            a little like sleep
            devoid of dreams
            i can, but presume..
            perhaps something, like
            a graveyard devoid of names..
            or maybe, it's where
            memories we forget, congregate
            to lament, their ill-fated
            nothingness, despite being once
            being so pivotal to our worth..
            (lol
            how I do go-on eh my friend
            but alas what do i know
            still a lovely, thought provoking
            read, thank you! Hyung)

            • Neville



              I am indeed replete .. thank you for indulging me again dear friend & brother Mek .. Neville

            • Christina8

              Whatever it was, I hope it was good! Lovely poem, N!

              • Neville



                it was good while it lasted .. thank you C



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