New Depth

PoeticBiscuit

I paid attention in science,

During those dreadful,

High-school days.

I know there is only,

So far you can fall,

Before you meet the end.

Eventually you’ll meet,

The fiery earth core.

Yet every day,

I find a new depth-

To fall for you.

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Comments +

Bobby O July 1st, 2023 10:56
Nice words but I got a question? If you begin the comparison of depth to a fiery core which some may find as a reference to Hell? And the in thenext sentence that same act of chasing into that depth is now relayed as positive representation of falling in love. It’s maybe risky?
orchidee July 1st, 2023 13:02
I fell off a ladder. Is that the same sort of thing you mean?! heehee. (I didn't really).

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