My Angel

Teddy.15

 

A broad shadow coming down

onto ground
right in front of my eyes


an enormity of wings
protecting me like a feathered shield
reassuring me, that I wasn't alone
she was here  

my very own miracle
holding on to me


my shakes and tremors
soothed by her grasp
her strength so powerful
guiding me through
with a sense of tranquility


I felt courageous...


and then out of nowhere I was.

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  • Caring dove

    I believe in angels , teddy 🙂

    A lovely writing

    Glad the Angel gave you courage

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear rose. 🤗 This was actually a very personal experience.

      • Caring dove

        I once heard angels ‘ singing ‘ quite a few years ago sounded like a chorus of angels .. and I’ve only had white feathers in the house a few times aswell as seeing mirrors of light in my room

        Yes , I think you have mentioned a experience before with angels

        Such a caring gentle presence that they are

      • orchidee

        A fine write T.
        KP scared me. She got some over-sized wings, pretending to be The Bird Woman! heehee. Anything to draw attention to herself. lol.
        I talk some rubbish.

        • Teddy.15

          lol thanks so much orchi. 🤗

        • Christina8

          This is a wonderful write, Teddy! I'm glad you found your courage. I do believe in angels. Great job!

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much for coming by today dear Cristina 🤗

          • Bella Shepard

            Dearest Teddy, this is so beautiful. To find that angel, that confidence and sense of well being that is priceless. Your angel shines inside and lights your way. God bless dear friend!

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much dear Bella, bless you too. 🤗

            • Goldfinch60

              Our angels are always looking after us Teddy.

              Andy

              • Teddy.15

                They are but I never knew until I experienced such. Thank you dear Andy. 🤗

              • L. B. Mek

                brilliant, dear Poetess
                love the patience you showcase
                line by line, layering imagery
                while unravelling your metaphor
                great example of your skills
                I think you got the pacing perfect
                and that poetic voice, tonality
                in-sync with your theme
                it's not too bleak nor too upbeat
                imbued with a
                a tendril of that serenity we all
                seek
                (I know how much the angels
                in your life, mean to you
                so am so happy you inked a poem
                to attest to their worth in your life)
                a poem as beautiful
                as the kind heart that penned it
                thank you!

                • Teddy.15

                  You have no idea what your words mean, I'm terrible at spacing grammar and lines, so I am so grateful dear Mek, I'm not the best at pasting copying and so on, I'm not a lover of technology I wish I was, so thank you thank you for your encouraging words. ❤️



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