She identifies as zero, every time I ask her age.
Not three or nearly four. The number zero, like her best friend.
Sometimes she not even human and becomes a dinosaur
Transcending into a dragon to help the sick and poor.
Every day we party for just sitting on potty, debate why we can't just live in the park with the pirate ship.
This journey is definitely not so easy, to guide and teach has not been breezy.
Yet to dance with her completes me, to let my soul glow beneath me, in a moment of inner harmony
If I was to only get back half of the love this gives to me, I'd be living better than half of humanity. Knowing the vibration I've made can never leave, only moving forward to a point of serenity.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I honestly can't say how happy I was to find a song I'd not heard from before my daughter was born! Yesterday I danced with my feet hardly touching the ground and all my pain went away through the tears of loving every moment.... it was like seeing 5 years in 5 seconds flash before me. I am broken and remade everyday! (This was also written a while ago until I found the last entry now, and I'm feeling gooood) Keep up the write!
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Hi Dan
It’s nice to feel in a high vibration .. away from sadness , and negative feelings
Glad your feeling ok
And nice writing 🙂
Thank you my friend... its been a while that I've felt the energy to really love to move and not because I felt I had too!
It’s nice to feel in a light nice energy 🙂 glad you feel ok
‘ to guide and teach has not been breezy.
Yet to dance with her completes me, to let my soul glow beneath me, in a moment of inner harmony ‘
Beautiful words here )
That's my amazing muse! I shouldn't ask for more even though I find I do! The blissful feeling only comes when you really feel you've got all you need!
Thank you again for your support and time
Good write Dan. I'm gonna glow too!
Thank you my friend, just make sure you don't go radioactive lol
So glad that you are feeling so good Dan.
Andy
Let it shine my friend... who knows how long it will last but I should have faith to who always come back!
Music children and dancing, 3 things bound to lift any spirits. Gorgeous dear Dan ❤️
3 is the magic number! So I've heard lol
Thank you my friend
'so go ahead and do what you love to do'
well I love to read poetry, inked
with crimson sincerity
allowing me to live vicariously
and rejoice in your joy
at witnessing that sunshine face
glow, while blossoming
into a smile iridescently sublime..
(poetry like yours
oh treasured friend of mine
stay blessed!)
Thank you for listening, reading, giving, absorbing and just for being fantastically you my friend.
Always a pleasure
A girls first love is their father.
I've only ever tried to be what I never had and definitely know they showed me a new way to love! With arms open wide, ready to hug but never hold. Be wild never be submissive unless it your choice....
Think I'll carry this on!
Thank you as ever for your time
Dan
She is as lucky to have you as you are her
Can't beat a write from the heart
Beautiful
Cheers buddy! Means alot!
Capturing the soul of childhood and the joy and wonder they inspire… good write…
Thank you so much.. she is a delightful muse when I want it to be lol
Always appreciated
Great piece Dan, children are so precious and truly the greatest gift that we as parents can receive,keep up the great work my friend, and enjoy these little moments
Absolutely my 3rd gift that I'm trying my hardest to live in the moment with knowing this is my last one!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
That's all we can do, live in the moment and enjoy every minute of it!!
I can see and hear and read why .. most beautiful in every respect and then much more so .. Neville
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