Her every changing mood and style
Had found his secret hidden file
Her heart warms like a baby's smile
She radiates pure love
She has the deepest darkest eyes
Succeeds at everything she tries
She saw right through his thin disguise
She radiates pure love
A touch that melts the coldest ice
Was used despite the world's advice
To hug a leper swamped with lice
She radiates pure love
The gods had sent her here to soothe
The angels watch her every move
They try so hard but must improve
She radiates pure love
He never did expect a share
Of beauty only she could wear
He prayed one day they'd be a pair
She recreates his love
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peto (
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Love the repeat of this line
She radiates pure love ‘
A lovely writing .. some people are very kind and caring in this world
Thank you Violet
And some can be quite spectacular
I appreciate your support so much
Extremely grateful
Oh I just wanna drink this in!!! What a spectacular write! "he prayed one day they'd be a pair, she recreates his love"Had me melting and I'm not even your muse! Encore! Thanks for making me smile this morning.....Christina
Thank you so much Christina
I'm almost speechless with such a kind review
Keep smiling
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , that’s absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it here’s no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was “celebrate” but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
This is just beautiful. Nice to meet you Peto. 🤗
Pleasure is all mine Teddy
You will be on my reading list today
Truly appreciate your time
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
A wonderful thing to say
Thank you very much Bella
Extremely grateful to you
I read this so many times!
It's so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it's just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
🪶Happy writing
Thank you very much
Such a kind comment
Appreciate it
Much obliged
Lovely poem, Peto. (Read it twice.)
Thanks very much hzugman
Appreciate the read and comment
Obliged
Beautiful piece, Peto... Loved every line!
Many thanks Garth
A gent
Very grateful
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