I don't know where I'm suppose to look for you.
It's been three long years and I'm still unable to find you.
My search for you is driving me crazy,
everytime I try to look for you , Ilose myself in the process .
My everyheart beat reminds me of you ,
which makes my eyes drown in pool of tears.
I'm on a search for you but I don't want to find you,
Your voice is playing on repeat in my mind, which
makes my heart braek to a million pieces,
I still don't understand why you stole my heart , if you wanted to throw it away.
My heart longs for you , like the the dark nights that long for the the moon.
Can you please fix me me like the my broken poem , which has alot of grammer.
Love
Lonely me
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Author:
Nik (
Offline) - Published: July 8th, 2023 13:59
- Comment from author about the poem: This is poem is love letter to Ane
- Category: Forgiveness
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Comments3
Really enjoyed this debut Nik
Looking forward to reading more from you
Thank you
I felt it!! The deep longing! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you
Nik Nik Nik there’s a secret An important methodology.
It’s fine to pay tribute like you did but here’s a service of good Will from a friend , there were moments in your tribute that felt like dual purpose , like the tribute might be a tool or device to attach to Ane. The tribute is something we should be humble and honest enough to extend. But it’s better that the sentiment not be a strategy to attract or attach. The equation is simple. To accomplish those much tougher goals concentrate on informing how you Will make their life better, how you add depth to HER TELLING how much you desire is not nearly as effective as concentrating on your benefits to her. The other way risks turning tribute into begging. NEVER BEG
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