The darkest places of hell
can sometimes be where my light gives birth
and my intelligence although sometimes challenged
will win through to wisdom
a simple spark in my mind
can certainly start a fire
and as much as I’m skeptical
I’m also open to possibility
so approach me at your peril
you may well be surprised.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2023 05:43
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard, L. B. Mek, sorenbarrett
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Comments8
Surprises can be good! Bring it on!! And yes, in the darkest times, we find our brightest light. "A simple spark"! Beautiful!"
Thank you dear Liz indeed my friend ❤️
Hope there is always light at the end of every tunnel. Nice work Teddy!
Dipends on the day lol thank you so much 💖
I know the darkest places of....... in me marriage to KP! lol.
Mr O 🤗 Then I'm Truly sorry to remind you. LoL
We need the opposites of life to live fully, said so beautifully in this poem. Your simple spark has created a real gem here, and a real fav.
Dear Bella absolutely, thank you for your very kind words 💖
Amazing
Finding hell inspirational
Enjoy your writing very much
I'm approaching
Surprise me
Boo 🤣
Brilliant!
'my intelligence, challenged
will win through to wisdom
a simple spark in my mind'
I knew you'd choose those lines, lol you know my intelligence is always questioned. Thank you sweet Mek. 💖
That spark of light will always be with you Teddy and it will shine out for us all.
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy 💖 I hope you and Mary are having a fab summer.
This one Teddy has hidden meaning. It is sometimes out of the darkest shadows that poetry is born. Many times I have been accused of writing too dark of passage. But it is out of pain that a mother gives birth. This was a most beautiful and insightful poem
Thank you so much dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
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