Sunlight To Rain.

Goldfinch60



Bathed in sunlight

We stepped onto the lawn,

Struck four croquet balls

Towards the hoops.

Bathed in pouring rain

We rushed off the lawn,

Jumped in our cars

And went home!

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2023 00:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: I have played croquet in rain many times but yesterday the heavens opened.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 18
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  • Neville



    good heavens .. anyone for shove ha'penny πŸ™‚

    • Goldfinch60

      Used to play that 'ack in the day'.

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      Wot - you went home to the barn?

      • Goldfinch60

        Afraid so Dave, well there is a bar in it. LOL.

        Andy

        • Doggerel Dave

          The juxtaposition Butch and your croquet tickled my funny bone no end.

          Also thanks for the reminder of that movie.

        • orchidee

          You used to play bagatelle too!? Did we play it 5 million ago, you and I? Good write Gold.

          • Goldfinch60

            Oh yes played that as well, so very long ago.

            Andy

          • LIZ

            Did you know it used to be called β€œcrooky”? Low impact exercise! Lol

            • Goldfinch60

              It may be low impact exercise Liz but I have been in competitions where I have stood on croquet lawns for seven hours.

              Andy

            • MendedFences27

              Such is life. Risky, but fun. - Phil A.

              • Goldfinch60

                Very true Phil, life is fun.

                Andy

              • Teddy.15

                LOL πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€£ home to Mary no less. πŸ’–

                • Goldfinch60

                  No, Mary was playing as well, we rushed to the car together, of course when we got home Teddy we had to strip off our wet clothes.......πŸ™„πŸ˜πŸ™„.

                  Andy

                  • Teddy.15

                    LOL of course πŸ˜‚

                  • Bella Shepard

                    Sorry the rain came and stopped play, but it did inspire this poem and well remembered movie clip. Thank you my friend.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Bella, much appreciated.

                      Andy



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