So Very Roughly Taken
Beneath that now famous
cheesecloth dress of hers
she tried so hard to cross
her legs and hold her breath ..
Having never dreamed
of being forced to kiss through
helpless, flailing arms,
clenched fists and teeth before ..
So Very Roughly Taken
Beneath that now famous
cheesecloth dress of hers
she tried so hard to cross
her legs and hold her breath ..
Having never dreamed
of being forced to kiss through
helpless, flailing arms,
clenched fists and teeth before ..
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Powerful words Neville.
Andy
I fear so Andy ..
I bought KP a cheesecloth - dress? Nope, a bit of material to put on wooden chopping board when chopping cheese! So the chopping board does not get damaged. I thought more about the chopping board than of her. lol.
I imagine you will be for the chop when you get released Mr O 🐀🐭🐀🐭👍
I thought she wanted cheesecloth for cooking summat with cheese in it! lol.
Sad, but true piece! Thank you for sharing!
sadly yes, and thank you Liz for stopping by
Those last four lines paint the picture.
We live in a troubled time, but this has gone on for centuries.
Short and concise and to the point, a piece of master craft. - Phil A.
You have just made my day sir Fences n truly .. thank you Phil .. Neville
No thrills at all here you say it like it is and unfortunately in your incredible line of work darling Nev, you see this all too often, it's people like you who are 100% selfless to take the time to help others and I can only speak as 1 woman but I say thank you a thousand times. 💓
I am struck dumb as well as smitten .. how kind you are & how red in the face am I .. ❤️
is it a terrible thing, though I been diverted by cheesecloth.
Can ya beat cheese, like you can beat an egg? It's getting late in the day - causes me to utter more nonsense than usual! lol.
Thank you dear Nev for tackling a subject that women have always struggled with in just about every imaginable place. Kudos my friend!
the surface may be skimmed but there's one hell of a long way to go .. thank you Bella and with kindest regards ,, Neville
all abusers and rapist's
should have the words
'deserved it' and a mini skirt
tattooed on their foreheads for life
so everyone can understand
how depraved and ignorant
that thought process, truly is!
(an important write Hyung
and yes, our gender has a long
way
to go, before we can begin
to comprehend the collective depths
of our generational crimes)
still, we who acknowledge
and wage a war, against
that societal monster we know too well
must believe in a better
and do what we can
hoping, somehow
it may accumulate to being enough
to offset what evil is committed
by the weak, spineless men of the world
well spoked my friend .. many thanks for that most worthy & welcome addendum .. Neville
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