Clearly Departed
Clearly departed,
as indeed
you most recently
and likewise,
now irrefutably are ..
And for all
those who may still
be watching ..
Take note,
this is what happens
when you
inadvertently play
tag and then
get bounced off the
bonnet
of a speeding car into
the gutter
or sidewalk, or whatever ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: July 17th, 2023 02:08
- Comment from author about the poem: accidents will always happen, some of them are seriously unavoidable .. this one happened on my way to the office yesterday and should never happened 🖤
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Comments6
I was gonna mow down KP, but she bounced up again, with all that botox! lol. That's going too far, says Fido.
way too far 🐀
Ahh, she's OK - she bounced back up, being full of botox. lol.
yeah, I've totalled a few cars in my past
a most shameful past
(hope you're ok my freind
always an unnerving thing to experience)
Hope you n yours have a good week, stay safe Hyung
I'm okay but undeniably shaken .. best wishes for the week ahead reciprocated brother M .. N
I've actually seen a few things over the weeks very disturbing. However you have another beautifully written piece here. Glad you were only the watcher dear Nev. ❤️
it's not nice is it Teddy .. thank you my lovely .. ❤️
sorry to hear that.
its a dreadful road .. thank you for stopping by .. Neville
A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take heed, or at least pay attention while playing.
Your poem is short and to the point. and graphic enough to leave a lasting impression. A good one. - Phil A.
it was a dreadful sight sir .. thank you kindly for your understanding .. Neville
Emotive words Neville, I am so fortunate that in my long life I have never seen anything like this happen. I am so grateful.
Andy
stay that way my friend .. and thank you ..
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