Two Ants One Question
Like two ants
dancing
in a sugar pot ..
Life can be
so very sweet
can it not ..
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Neville (
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Two Ants One Question
Like two ants
dancing
in a sugar pot ..
Life can be
so very sweet
can it not ..
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How very kind .. thank you sir .. Neville
Sounds like overdose to me lol
Have a great day my friend
........................................................................... sweet 🙂
Nice!! Sweet AND spicy! Need both lol 😉
jeez I love it when ya talk dirty LIZ 🙂
🙊🙈
Good write N.
I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.
no wonder she's dunna runna
Don't hurry back, I tell her! lol.
I rescued a spider today - but that's not two ants!
Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small
thanks a million Violet .. I know I am 🙂
The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.
how lovely is that CB .. very .. I might add 🙂
Short lived if my wife spots them
............................................................. ouch 🐜🐜
Would it be trit to say "short and sweet"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I'd love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it's probably a jitterbug. Now I'm smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.
you can say whatever you please my very dearest of Bella's .. and I am smiling with you .. Neville
I had to correct my error, it was supposed to be trite and not trit. I did look up trit and found it to be the ternary equivalent of a bit ; a fundamental unit of information that may take any of three distinct states. I have absolutely no idea what that means. You are the sweetest!
then I shall thank you consciously, subconsciously and unconsciously .. Neville 🙂
It sure can... That's one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
Now aint that the tooth .. cheers brother Garth 🙂👍
The fewer 'ants dancing in" sugar pots the 'sweeter" it will be.
A very clever image created by you in this poem, happy ants dancing in sugar, setting up the final rhetorical question. But let's not encourage the ants. - Phil A,
Your word is my command sir Fences, consider it sorted .. and cheers my friend .. Neville
Your poem was purely delightful…
I am delighted, thank you so very much .. Neville
Life can be so wonderfully sweet as mine is. Neville.
Andy
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sticky sweet..
explains why hollywod's
no1 profession, is a nose surgeon
we all need a release
some are powdery white and sweet
others... destroy!
an anthill's life, indeed
(a deeper read warranted of this
subtle gem
my very wise friend, loved this
such acute imagery
executed so subtly)
two ants, one question .. endless possibilities .. many thanks Mek
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