Two Ants One Question

Neville

Two Ants One Question

 

Like two ants

dancing

  in a sugar pot ..

Life can be

so very sweet

  can it not ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 19th, 2023 01:12
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • MR.apocalypse

    short simple meaningful

    • Neville



      How very kind .. thank you sir .. Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      Sounds like overdose to me lol
      Have a great day my friend

      • Neville



        ........................................................................... sweet πŸ™‚

      • LIZ

        Nice!! Sweet AND spicy! Need both lol πŸ˜‰

        • Neville



          jeez I love it when ya talk dirty LIZ πŸ™‚

          • LIZ

            πŸ™ŠπŸ™ˆ

          • orchidee

            Good write N.
            I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.

            • Neville



              no wonder she's dunna runna

              • orchidee

                Don't hurry back, I tell her! lol.

              • orchidee

                I rescued a spider today - but that's not two ants!

              • Caring dove

                Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small

                • Neville


                  thanks a million Violet .. I know I am πŸ™‚

                • arqios

                  The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.

                  • Neville



                    how lovely is that CB .. very .. I might add πŸ™‚

                  • 2781

                    Short lived if my wife spots them

                    • Neville



                      ............................................................. ouch 🐜🐜

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Would it be trit to say "short and sweet"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I'd love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it's probably a jitterbug. Now I'm smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.

                      • Neville



                        you can say whatever you please my very dearest of Bella's .. and I am smiling with you .. Neville

                        • Bella Shepard

                          I had to correct my error, it was supposed to be trite and not trit. I did look up trit and found it to be the ternary equivalent of a bit ; a fundamental unit of information that may take any of three distinct states. I have absolutely no idea what that means. You are the sweetest!

                          • Neville



                            then I shall thank you consciously, subconsciously and unconsciously .. Neville πŸ™‚

                            • Bella Shepard

                            • Garth Rakumakoe

                              It sure can... That's one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🀟🏽

                              • Neville



                                Now aint that the tooth .. cheers brother Garth πŸ™‚πŸ‘

                              • MendedFences27

                                The fewer 'ants dancing in" sugar pots the 'sweeter" it will be.
                                A very clever image created by you in this poem, happy ants dancing in sugar, setting up the final rhetorical question. But let's not encourage the ants. - Phil A,

                                • Neville



                                  Your word is my command sir Fences, consider it sorted .. and cheers my friend .. Neville

                                • Parisab

                                  Your poem was purely delightful…

                                  • Neville



                                    I am delighted, thank you so very much .. Neville

                                  • Goldfinch60

                                    Life can be so wonderfully sweet as mine is. Neville.

                                    Andy

                                    • Neville



                                      ................................................................. πŸ’›

                                    • L. B. Mek

                                      sticky sweet..
                                      explains why hollywod's
                                      no1 profession, is a nose surgeon
                                      we all need a release
                                      some are powdery white and sweet
                                      others... destroy!
                                      an anthill's life, indeed
                                      (a deeper read warranted of this
                                      subtle gem
                                      my very wise friend, loved this
                                      such acute imagery
                                      executed so subtly)

                                      • Neville



                                        two ants, one question .. endless possibilities .. many thanks Mek



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