Poem : 'The man-eater' (imaginary) ; 3 April, 2023

 

Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem for analysis, please ?

 

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Soman Ragavan : My poem : "The man eater." (Imaginary). Please analyse by stanza and then give overall comments. Make references to similar works, if possible. POEM : THE MAN-EATER (Imaginary)

 

 

 

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Thank you for sharing your poem "The Man-Eater." Here's an analysis of each stanza:

Stanza 1:

• Sets the scene of a village in turmoil due to the news of a man-eater.
• Emphasizes the stealth and brutality of the beast's actions.

Stanza 2:

• Depicts mankind's response to the threat, declaring war on the man-eater.
• Conveys the belief that despite the beast's ability to roam freely, it is unlikely to escape man's pursuit and vengeance.

Stanza 3:

• Highlights the innocence of the peaceful man who becomes a victim, torn away from his family.
• Expresses the idea that the man-eater has crossed a line by devouring the harmless man.
• Uses the metaphor of "deadliest firespitters" to symbolize the weapons wielded by men.

Stanza 4:

• Describes the trap set for the beast, using a sprawling net.
• Portrays the animal's desperate attempt to escape, but acknowledges the inevitability of man's victory.

Stanza 5:

• Depicts the beast being cornered and ultimately killed, symbolizing its punishment.
• Features the plea of the beast, highlighting the issue of animal extinction in contrast to human population growth.
• Implies that man's dominance will lead to his downfall as well.

Stanza 6:

• Conveys the aftermath of the beast's demise, with the man-eater's skin becoming a trophy for man.
• Suggests that while daring animals can cause havoc, man's firepower is formidable and can overcome any threat.

Overall, your poem explores the theme of the predator becoming the prey, showcasing mankind's dominance over nature. It touches upon the imbalance between human expansion and the plight of endangered animals. The use of vivid imagery and metaphors adds depth to the narrative.

In terms of similar works, your poem shares thematic elements with Rudyard Kipling's "The Jungle Book" and William Blake's "The Tyger." Both poems explore the relationship between humans and predatory animals, delving into themes of power, violence, and the inherent nature of both predator and prey.

Your poem captures a sense of urgency and delivers a thought-provoking message. It showcases your ability to create vivid imagery and express social concerns.

Soman Ragavan : Thank you. Goodbye for now.

 

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                                              POEM :

                                    THE MAN-EATER
                                            (Imaginary)
                                             
Hark ! Like wildfire hath spread through the village
The news about this man-eater and his carnage;
Noiselessly did the beast creep up thither
To gobble a harmless man as gory dinner.

'Pon mighty Man since he hath declar’d war,
Now he might range anywhere, near or far;
But, to save his skin his chances be slim :
Man will get at him, mangle him, stuff him.

His own business the peaceful man was minding,
When cruelly was he pluck'd away from his family;
This man-eater hath gone a dinner too far, really :
The deadliest firespitters yon men be fingering.

Across the bush a sprawling net hath been cast :
Around the panting beast now ‘tis closing fast;
For his dear life the animal is scampering away :
But, Man always wins his bet, come what may.

Into a dusty ditch hath been driven the beast,
For Man's watering mouth, truly a feast;
Now wilt thou pay for thy infamy, marauder :
Swears Man, for he be the ultimate hunter.

"While ye be subject to some population explosion,"
Pleads the beast, "we be on the verge of extinction !"
"And extinction shortly will there be for thyself,
As thy head shalt repose 'pon our shelf !"

The gory remains of the mangl'd man lie in yon grave :
The skin of the man-eater is fondl'd by Man, the brave;
Daring animals may spread rampage, sheer and dire,
But, from Man's firespitter will leap out a sheet of fire....
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NOTE : This is NOT meant to be derogatory towards animals. I have written many poems about kindness to animals. See my poems : The cardinal, The hungry sparrow, The toiling ox, The panting ox (New Delhi), The waiting oxen (New Delhi), The octopus, A dog’s life, The killing ground, The donkey’s tale.

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