As Yet Unfurnished
Oh’ so carelessly
discarded
still warm to the touch
and likewise strewn
with such magnificent
abandon
across the well-trod
parquet polished floor
of our much used,
yet otherwise ..
Still secret, rented room ..
As Yet Unfurnished
Oh’ so carelessly
discarded
still warm to the touch
and likewise strewn
with such magnificent
abandon
across the well-trod
parquet polished floor
of our much used,
yet otherwise ..
Still secret, rented room ..
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The imagination fills with thoughts Neville. A secret room eh?
Andy
don't we all have at least one .. cheers .. 🙂
I refuse to buy KP a secret room where she can give botox treatments to others. lol.
the word on the street suggests otherwise
I wonder why I been seeing more trouts about lately.
erm, so Hyung
sometimes I just read your title and then
lose control of my fingers for a bit
inspired
to try and scribble a little poetic reply
since I so relate with your words
thank you!
(replete, with our youthful zeal
lust inspiring us to love without handbrakes
we were young
all we chased was a place
for us to embrace
and cuddle, all night
since, climbing out
of the toilet window to evade capture
got old, after one rainy weekend
so now
we trace Time, in a finger caress
with that ease of mind
yeah, it's a lot of money
when between us, we can barely
pay the rent
let alone the bills, but
the memories we made, in that
very first place, we both
got to call our own, even for just
a while, lasted us a lifetime
dear, first love..
and yes i still remember it all
like it was yesterday
wine n dining you on tuna sandwiches
and cheap strawberry wine
making your lips, taste
a little more sweet, with every sip
I remember it all
no regrets
just mementos I cherish, with pride
knowing how lucky I was
that it was you I got to share
those moments with)
............................................... Blimey 🙂
yeah, reading your poetry is an extreme sport for me
no parachute just diving in ink, deeper than Yorkshire pudding..
ahem.. 'and dats all i gotsa a say bout daaat'
😁
🍾🥂 cheers Mr newly minted Grandad
How was the first week wearing that heavyweight belt Hyung
lol
Fraught .. but hopefully getting there .. (to be continued) 🙂👍
so happy for you brother, I've been smiling 'all teeth', all week
😁😁😁
I definitely have a secret room....filled with thoughts...moments, and black rose petals!! 🖤 Beautiful read!!
How lovely is that .. Thank you so very much LIZ & truly🖤
I love the thought of a secret room...from your first book...Wonderful thoughts and fantasies listed here...C
You bet'cha .. thanks a million C 🙂
The thought of a secret room is so beguiling, where the fantasies of your heart are safe and await. Love it!
and there was me thinking everyone had at least one .. thank you so much Bella .. Neville
My secret room was in my head, sadly couldn't afford a real one.
Beautiful!
Thank you so much .. Neville
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