Just Because She Is ..

Neville

  Just Because She Is ..

 

If there were more fitting words

  than either beautiful or perfect ..

 

Then I would not, for one single

  moment hesitate, to use them here ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 25th, 2023 01:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Delivered @ 06.21 this mane by caesarean section after a very long labour, Astrid say's hi ❤️
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, L. B. Mek
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  • Goldfinch60

    Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.

    Andy

    • Neville



      thank you kindly Andy .. Neville

    • orchidee

      Ahh, a fine write N.
      Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.

      • Neville



        thank you for stopping by Mr. O

        • orchidee

          Oh, never mind KP today, in this your joyful day!

        • LIZ

          Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words 😉

          • Neville



            I sure hope your wish comes true .. in fact, I'm gonna make it .. Cheers🍷

            • LIZ

              Oh yes! 🍷 🥂

            • Caring dove

              Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell

              • Neville



                Many thanks indeed Violet, that is very kind of you .. I am still a little shell-shocked, but happily so 🙂

              • sorenbarrett

                In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.

                • Neville



                  I feel similarly my friend .. many thank you's for stopping by and of course, for noticing .. Neville

                • Christina8

                  Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C

                  • Neville



                    Top marks for guessing correctly C .. I shall be having a large glass of red and then hitting the sack soon after .. Cheers 🍷x

                  • Teddy.15

                    Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. 💓

                    • Neville


                      I dont often get the chance .. and if I dont get the chance again, thank you Teddy ❤️

                    • Teddy.15

                      Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family ❤️❤️

                      • Neville



                        Bless you Teddy as indeed, I am blessed too & truly ❤️❤️❤️

                      • L. B. Mek

                        !! Precious !!
                        🍾🥂
                        (divinely beautiful, indeed!)
                        congrats to you and yours
                        dear cherished friend

                        • Neville



                          Thank you brother Mek .. that means such an awful lot to me .. Neville



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