Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville ππ
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville ππ
Just Because She Is ..
If there were more fitting words
than either beautiful or perfect ..
Then I would not, for one single
moment hesitate, to use them here ..

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Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.
Andy
thank you kindly Andy .. Neville
Ahh, a fine write N.
Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.
thank you for stopping by Mr. O
Oh, never mind KP today, in this your joyful day!
Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words π
I sure hope your wish comes true .. in fact, I'm gonna make it .. Cheersπ·
Oh yes! π· π₯
Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell
Many thanks indeed Violet, that is very kind of you .. I am still a little shell-shocked, but happily so π
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.
I feel similarly my friend .. many thank you's for stopping by and of course, for noticing .. Neville
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
Top marks for guessing correctly C .. I shall be having a large glass of red and then hitting the sack soon after .. Cheers π·x
Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. π
I dont often get the chance .. and if I dont get the chance again, thank you Teddy β€οΈ
Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family β€οΈβ€οΈ
Bless you Teddy as indeed, I am blessed too & truly β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
!! Precious !!
πΎπ₯
(divinely beautiful, indeed!)
congrats to you and yours
dear cherished friend
Thank you brother Mek .. that means such an awful lot to me .. Neville
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