I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
you are quite easily
my greatest regret ..
well at least you
would have been,
had you only ever
so much, as once
dared, to said yes ..
but I will be blowed
if I should ever
dare to say it again ..
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
you are quite easily
my greatest regret ..
well at least you
would have been,
had you only ever
so much, as once
dared, to said yes ..
but I will be blowed
if I should ever
dare to say it again ..
Comments9
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
Good write N.
Thank you O .
I would suggest a lot of things about KP, most of them unprintable! lol.
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
it seems you can see write through me .. thank you muchly my friend .. Neville
But...you ARE asking again. At least..."suggesting". You never know! π
Ah' but then .. I can be very suggestive Liz .. I just don't know whether that is a strength or conversely a weakness .. but I am going to thank you write here and now & regardless .. π·cheers .. Neville
Mmmmm yes, same! I'm choosing to see it as a strength! Cheers π·
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don't even know how to include it in comments!π
It's always the "what could have been's" that seem to plague us most, because we'll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
How impossible you make it for me to thank you enough .. I am truly honoured Bella and most grateful to you .. Neville π
Greetings Nev.Yes I'm still alive π€£ Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words π
Good heavens .. good to see you Neil & thank you for stopping by this mane .. I hope you will hang around and yes, your posting is sure to be well received .. I hope you are rested and well ππ
And what do they say dear Nev? Regret the things you've done rather than the things you haven't. Oh so beautifully expressed darling friend. π
I am speechless .. but oh so magnificently grateful Teddy β€οΈ
yeah, some rejections are brutal
I was scarred for life
when the first girl I approached
decided to elucidate
she rejected me, because i was
'TOO', ugly.... π€’ππ€
that T.k.o. still ahs be trying to beat
the eight count of life
words, do tend to sting a little deep
when coming from those
we thought we were connecting with
brutal..
lol
oh well, a good life lesson learnt early
(her name was Emma
we were around 8 or 9, back then
and yes sadly, I met her a decade or so
later
and she was still drop-dead gorgeous
and had a heart of gold, and no
she had no idea who i was...)
my life lesson...
aim lower
way lower
like, I helped out at the blind centre
for a while..
lol
and there's them, tellin me all along jus wot a handsome devil you really are sir Mek ..
π
guess
I can't be all that bad, if i'm to try
and claim association with those
rock-n-rollers of life, like you Hyung
π»
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