Love’s truth
spread out on a sheet of red ink
blood drained from my weakened veins
sucked violently into my pen
I’m drowned in agony
as I write from
the ruins of my very own Everest
I am without lines…
just vertigo.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: July 27th, 2023 02:54
- Category: Reflection
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Oh I like this one. Real love will have us writing our truth in blood. It can feel crazy at times. But when that climax hits...it all comes together beautifully! ❤️
Your vision of my poetry always astounds me, you seem to see so much positivity even when I'm so dramatic lol ❤️ thank you dear Liz.
Lol I'm a "glass half full" kind of person. 😄 I can't help it.
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Love,truth, blood, violence, agony
And an ending that left me dizzy
Without lines???
Back with a vengeance
Great read Teddy
Yes, lol thank you Peto I'm nothing if not dramatic about love 💖 thank you so much for coming by today
Such expressive lines about the emotions inside that one feels when emptying the dam through a pin prick of a pen.
Sometimes we really are just left sick and dizzy. Thank you so much dear Sorenbarrett for coming by to these scribblings 💖
KP's dramatic too - a drama queen! lol.
Oh yes. She has had her fair share of love especially with you MR O 🤗❤️
It's Too Much Info (TMI) to tell of our bed-times! lol.
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I love the way you've framed this watershed moment in terms of blood and red ink. Loss of blood will cause severe vertigo as can the pain of love. Such artistry in these lines dear Teddy!
Awe dear Bella, sometimes love simply equals empty lines ❤️ thank you for your absolutely wonderful review. X
Stunningly beautiful🥰
Thank you so very very much dear Thinkerbell. 💖
even when the going gets really tough, there are times when one just has to sit back, take a deep breath, close one's eyes gently and enjoy the view ..
and that's where you took me today my very dearest of Teddy's .. ❤️
Awe, up there in pains clouds lol thank you my dearest Nev. ❤️
Oops I forgot about the knee ..................... sorry .. or should that be ouch? ❤️
Love's truth can also be there at the bottom of that mountain Teddy, just be careful climbing down and love will be there waiting for you.
Andy
Awe Andy, that's so romantic lol ❤️ you know I love this subject I have a lot of love, I'm very lucky. Thank you dear friend.
Brilliant!
(abstract imagery at its most relatable vividity)
I read and learn, dear Poetess
Learn from meee? LoL oh don't do that dear Mek. LoL 💖 🤣
hey Seal already said we all need
a little crazy in our life, to survive
😎
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