Smeared With Affection


Smeared With Affection


Without any doubt

whatsoever ..

Your eyes, are my

spring my love

those that

somehow force me

to see beyond

the blues

and the greens ..

Yet while we are still

at the mercy

of such intimate liars

and fools ..

I swear I constantly

find myself

looking for colours ..

Indeed those,

that still live and do

thrive, someplace

else entirely ..

Pinned albeit

loosely, between

these poor

clouded, rose tinted

lenses of ours ..

And which still,

by the way

religiously haunt us ..

Although by

the time, we both

leave here

come morning ..

Our combined DNA

shall be strewn

with abandon

all over the place ..


dispensed with,

disposed of

then used to betray

us covertly ..

Until all becomes

still, calm and good again ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 31st, 2023 03:45
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 34
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, LIZ, Teddy.15.
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  • orchidee

    DNA? Swoon!
    Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯

  • orchidee

    Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that's all it is for KP and me. lol.

    • Neville

      there must be a poem in there somewhere methinks ..

      • orchidee

        I slag off KP. Isay 'You molecule, you'. She got about 5 million of them in her botox lips - to start with! lol.
        Arggh, the F word in comments - swoon! Woof - Fido barking too.

      • Teddy.15

        I read this one a few times
        (bloody wonderful) πŸ’“

        • Neville

          I am indeed hugely honoured Teddy ❀️

        • LIZ

          Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we're all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!

          • Neville

            You just made my evening LIZ .. πŸ’œ

            • LIZ

              Awww and you just made mine!! πŸ’œ

            • L. B. Mek

              I grant my fears, wings
              free my tears to swim and serenade
              fate's rain-starved clouds and hills
              Within your fingers, life granted me
              peace and harmony
              enough for poetic lies to assuage
              My every ambition
              dear You, I've learnt from these craters you gifted
              and emptiness, you tattooed deep
              Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
              and yet, in a glance or stutter
              of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
              Once more ready to dive, lust first
              loyalty, not far behind
              energised by a glint of your relapsing
              approaching you slowly, tenderly
              dear universe, I promise
              Afford me this one mercy and I'll
              never will I ever need to seek
              Another opportunity to get things right
              now that I'm pulsing to a beat, of
              wedding rings and crimson vows
              Bled with pride!

              • Neville

                ........................ Lust shall be the death of me ........................ I hope .. Bless you M ... N

              • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                Great writing neville .. especially like these lines

                β€˜Your eyes, are my
                spring my love
                those that force me
                to see
                beyond the blues
                and the greens

                ( that’s beautiful )

                Pinned, albeit loosely
                between these
                poor clouded,
                rose tinted lenses

                A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too

                • Neville

                  how very kind and so much appreciated dear Violet .. πŸ™‚

                • Christina8

                  I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than "fucking' I think. Very good poem you have here! x

                  • Neville

                    why thank you Mistress C .............. N πŸ’œx

                  • Sunsetmet

                    The last lines calm and good again we can fix and work things out and mend
                    poor clouded rose tinted I love this lines lenses just great

                    • Neville

                      Bless you Sunsetmet .. many HUGE THANKYOU's my friend .. Neville

                    • Bella Shepard

                      I confess I am beguiled and bewildered in the most delightful way. I read this poem four times, and reading it aloud the last time, I paused to think about "without any doubt whatsoever.." , and its' implication, that perhaps the words are meant in the moment, "at the mercy of such intimate liars and fools" such as we? I may have it all wrong, but the enjoyment of this poem was digging to find treasure, which is in abundance. A wonderfully delicious poem dear Nev!

                      • Neville

                        that'll do perfectly Bella ................ bless you my friend .. Neville

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