Smeared With Affection
Without any doubt
whatsoever ..
Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that
somehow force me
to see beyond
the blues
and the greens ..
Yet while we are still
at the mercy
of such intimate liars
and fools ..
I swear I constantly
find myself
looking for colours ..
Indeed those,
that still live and do
thrive, someplace
else entirely ..
Pinned albeit
loosely, between
these poor
clouded, rose tinted
lenses of ours ..
And which still,
by the way
religiously haunt us ..
Although by
the time, we both
leave here
come morning ..
Our combined DNA
shall be strewn
with abandon
all over the place ..
Discarded,
dispensed with,
disposed of
then used to betray
us covertly ..
Until all becomes
still, calm and good again ..
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DNA? Swoon!
Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯
Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that's all it is for KP and me. lol.
there must be a poem in there somewhere methinks ..
I slag off KP. Isay 'You molecule, you'. She got about 5 million of them in her botox lips - to start with! lol.
Arggh, the F word in comments - swoon! Woof - Fido barking too.
I read this one a few times
(bloody wonderful) 💓
I am indeed hugely honoured Teddy ❤️
Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we're all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!
You just made my evening LIZ .. 💜
Awww and you just made mine!! 💜
I grant my fears, wings
free my tears to swim and serenade
fate's rain-starved clouds and hills
Within your fingers, life granted me
peace and harmony
enough for poetic lies to assuage
My every ambition
dear You, I've learnt from these craters you gifted
and emptiness, you tattooed deep
Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
and yet, in a glance or stutter
of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
Once more ready to dive, lust first
loyalty, not far behind
energised by a glint of your relapsing
Eyes...
approaching you slowly, tenderly
dear universe, I promise
Afford me this one mercy and I'll
guarantee
never will I ever need to seek
Another opportunity to get things right
now that I'm pulsing to a beat, of
wedding rings and crimson vows
Bled with pride!
........................ Lust shall be the death of me ........................ I hope .. Bless you M ... N
Great writing neville .. especially like these lines
‘Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that force me
to see
beyond the blues
and the greens
( that’s beautiful )
Pinned, albeit loosely
between these
poor clouded,
rose tinted lenses
A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too
how very kind and so much appreciated dear Violet .. 🙂
I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than "fucking' I think. Very good poem you have here! x
why thank you Mistress C .............. N 💜x
The last lines calm and good again we can fix and work things out and mend
poor clouded rose tinted I love this lines lenses just great
Bless you Sunsetmet .. many HUGE THANKYOU's my friend .. Neville
I confess I am beguiled and bewildered in the most delightful way. I read this poem four times, and reading it aloud the last time, I paused to think about "without any doubt whatsoever.." , and its' implication, that perhaps the words are meant in the moment, "at the mercy of such intimate liars and fools" such as we? I may have it all wrong, but the enjoyment of this poem was digging to find treasure, which is in abundance. A wonderfully delicious poem dear Nev!
that'll do perfectly Bella ................ bless you my friend .. Neville
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