The weekend was over
So back home we drove,
Such a great weekend,
Staying in our favourite place
Where all was done for us.
Sitting in the lounge
A waiter comes to me,
“Would you like a drink sir”
“Yes please I say”
I order the drinks,
They are brought to our table,
I can deal with that.
In our room we look out
And see the sun shining on the sea.
We walk the beach hand in hand,
Such a wonderful time was had.
But the most important thing
Was our love,
Our love for each other,
Shining brighter than the sun
Every moment of our life.
There we were together
In our favourite place
That we call “Our Place”.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 8th, 2023 01:20
- Comment from author about the poem: We went to our favourite Hotel on the Isle of Wight this weekend and had a great time. The picture was the view from our room at dawn, five o'clock on Sunday morning.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
Was it me, that waiter?! With the water. lol.
Not this time Orchi.
Andy
Oh so beautiful!! And I love the song!!
It was, thank you Liz.
Andy
Andy it's such a pleasure to share with you your sincerely true love story with Mary it gives so many hope. 💖💖
Thank you Teddy, it really is my pleasure.
Andy
Beautiful moment, Andy. Thanks for sharing.
My absolute pleasure Jerry.
Andy
There is something so special about "Our Place", that when you're not there you still see it and it gives you joy. A beautiful pic that captures a beautiful weekend, keep making those memories dear friend.
Thank you Bella, "Our Place" is very special to us and we will be going back many times.
Andy
Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers to share in the warmth and happiness of this special moment in their lives.
Thank you Mottakeenur, may many share these moments.
Andy
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