RINSE & REPEAT
She sensed my weakness Equivocating and unsure I fell prey to her practiced finesse
A victim shamefully drawn to false caress
self sentenced to Stockholm loneliness
Proceeding toward Stampeding interfacial
to renew and suffer Cascading betrayal
Pride peddled like garage sale
Bobby O
-
Author:
Bobby O (
Offline) - Published: August 11th, 2023 11:04
- Comment from author about the poem: We won’t get fooled again?
- Category: Nature
- Views: 40
Offline)
Comments10
Great to see a write from you Bobby
Superb lines
"Self sentenced to Stockholm lonliness"
A particular favourite
Scooter pic and the who reference in notes .... we are the mods
You catch it all. Much love Sherlock
Looks like the Barbie aesthetic enticed you too! Keep on throttling: You have captured a special destination here: Throughly faved the poem!
My Girlfriend rides a Harley. I got this mad sports knowledge and it’s tough for the guys at the bar to “win” one. Thought I’d throw them open and ride up on the bar following the girl on the Harley and looking like I should be teased in the Barbie bike. Gotta be a humble fool on occasion ?
Looks like the Harley and the Barbie had a baby! This was a great creation! Thanks for being adventurous and curious, my friend!
niceee, it really touche the heart
You’re the best. Thanks for the read.
no problem
It takes a tough man to wear pink and an even tougher one to ride such a vehicle. My respect. Great lines too "Stockholm loneliness" is that like the Stockholm syndrome?
Exact. Nice to know a few catch my meanders.
A really truthful write indeed
to the false caress self sentenced and on from there thanks for the read
Back at cha!
This is a hard fact. It's crazy how we can get used to abuse, and see it as love. Happens all the time. That's how I interpret false caress. It's a mind f%$* (I don't know how else to say it). No rinse and repeat anymore!!!
Understandable. My sis is two years younger and our house was the hangout house. It was my PRIVILEGE to know beautiful women as friends w no agenda. They are still amongst my best friends and when applicable I’d protect them. There were 8 and dudes would ask how many did I…
And when I said NONE they didn’t believe me everyone is a PERSON first not a conquest. I’m no saint and knowing that group as I did provided 411 for outside the hood ladies. I didn’t miss my turn and within our group I have respect. I digress , my ex was abusive toward me during her binges and it’s revolting and I learned
I guess you can see it from both sides then. I'm glad you learned, because having to repeat the same lesson over and over again is not fun!!!
2 more comments
Once bitten, twice shy .. or so they say .. some never learn ..
Twas the freaking Swedish meatballs and the hospitable Alpine Air.
........................................................... I Kea ya loud n Clea sir🎶🎶
Fantastic job Bobby.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.