1 The Watchtower
Embryos and fluids
More sez smoke than a Buddhist
Not such a bad idea have the nudists
Never has Alicia Silverstone looked so clueless
2 The Fall
A bright sun comes out with its heat
Then, a cool breeze
On Howe ave, nana's place
Frosted Flakes
They say that time's money but really I'm just tryina waste away
3 '08
Peers all smokin' weed
Talks about how fun it'd be
Just turnin' 16
Google then*1) sneak
About the 10th session later, lit deemed
Gettin' hooked a bit seems
Somewhere to smoke, not too but
quietly
*1) "then" is pronounced "thin"
It's a kinda natural neutral accent, the same applies to the rest of the footnotes. I just used them where I thought you would really need them
4 August
16 years old, shoutin' and screamin'
A head full of dreams dreamin'
The sun beamin'
Sweat off of skin steamin'
5 Open Letter
Enough mistakes made
Seemin' to relate fades
From the old ways, change
For what have may placed
6 Lost
There's the bridge, to the right
Just over a hill, a cold winter 3rd Ward night
It's dark but a bit lit
A snow storm with an*1) inch
Not too many but just a few people on their way
Not too late
On such a lost path
All that's left behind's so sad
*1) "an" is "in"
7 Hope
Nothin's permanent these days
Not countin' on much besides tryina get paid
Never's known what'll go which way
Love blind without feelin' betrayed
8 No Love in the Heart of Town
Hot summer day
Fetty Wap heavy rotates
Done pretendin' to find a God charades
Besides feelin' not havin to try, nothin's changed
Jumped in 1 after another place
Robbed different ways
Just lookin' for that hazy summer lake, under the tree shade
9 Sunset
Frequencies and wavelengths*1)
Through certain rivers human waste fish
Grassland swamp gasses on the way out the Secaucus train lift
I guess for what time'll forget to say, you shouldn't've waited
*1) "wavelenghts" is "wavelingths"
10 Skateboards, Weed and Rap (The Holy Trifecta)
"Yo, yo, it's the cops, run's!" not what i ever tried to hear
Why get busted for somethin' so mere?
How times wasted findin' better deals, you'd think it took place by the piers
Now, it's not so much of the dream that it would be, that it's near
11 Ghetto
A new found perspective of quote Jay Z's 'longshots'
Flippin' pages through Nike SB catalogs
About a grip of a hundred dollar wads
J. Cole and Kid Cudi in that order but Drake, my money's been on
Losin' hope itd get legalized soon enough, takin' a rip off of a 4 foot bong
Etnies, Emerica but Vans's tier top
12 No More Cold Winter
I mean, that I can say that we were ever that cool, it's not
More so that I'd end up up north, I thought
My imagination was just always filled with stories about God
What was supposed to be a prank call, I tried to stop
Politics were differencin'*1) at the spot
Really, I just saw a dumb kid who wasn't as hard as soft
I mean, that I think that he would be annoyin' but shocked
I mean, that I guess that a lot was atleast partly my fault
*1) "differencin'" is "diffrincin'"
13 October
That it'll all end some day's what they all say
Cool temperature*1) without rain
I don't know about the eternal but I remember May
Thought more of as innocent, nature and people's crooked ways
It's gettin' cold and dark as an uptempo fiddle plays
*1) "temperature" is "tempricher"
14 Warm
Why do worn, torn and dirty white Authentic Vans just look of a nice time?
How the moon at night would light sky
At intermittent intervals cast tight hooked bite line
Never before in a sight took bright by
15 Russia
In this off white sand, clear water beach, I might seem kinda chill but excited, be
I'm tryina look at the sun but not for it exactly reach
It's warm with a cool breeze
The water's not too cool, off of the sun shiny
Right on the warm sand, I'll lay down and sleep
16 Texts
Your skin's got tanned more than a bit beige
Past this time before we've stayed
It's already dark
A mess my room and head are
I'm just layin' down in bed
The air conditioner's to the coldest set
My phone plays music that I'm listenin' to on my chest
This heart pumps the sqwak's of seagulls at sundown but you could feel the stress
Then as well, the smallests of moments spent'll carry on in our steps
A couple of flashbacks stuck of what you had said
I reach for the chilled water and receive a notification of 1 of your texts
We met the loneliest of nights in a cold winter
Those summer vibes have been 'er
She's a girl just like you but brown
Ever findin' her I'm not sure of in my small town
17 Through Embers in Air
Sad to say that this book, when Winter unofficially does, ends
Night before daylight savin', then
The way that a hot summer unraveled this mess
Winter fire filled enough to light your whole tent
18 Anime
Iriko dashi in the air from a miso soup steam
On a table's unsweetened green tea
Black wave curl locks shag on tan skin
Black, a bit round and square frames tipped over half shut brown eye's lids
A light grey hoodie and burgundy joggers transition*1) from Osaka to skater fit
*1) "transition" is "trinsition"
19 A Night of Dance
Through far lands crossin' paths with this one romani
That she was the one that I'd been lookin' for, promised me
Carried on to say that back I'd be
Made it to what they call the East China Sea
20 Local for Self Sustainable
The legalization of pot meant no more havin' to hide
over top artist, Drake, monetary success compromised
A girl that I like that much, not ever, seems that I'll such find
Ago sometime in New Jersey chicks flock and into the river ducks dive
- Author: Hudson (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 11th, 2023 16:49
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Comments1
It’s just too long for me. I started but when I scrolled and noticed the length I just stopped. I haven’t taken any survey but I gotta think I’m not the only one who nails. Shame, cuz it looked promising.
i appreaciate it! its a whole chapbook, brother
I get it. It wasn’t a criticism but more just an observation maybe it can be segmented in parts even if a few. Small rewrites.
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