When I open my eyes, I see darkness, when I close my eyes,I see light.
But when I look at you , I see this beautiful smile that makes me smile back at you too.
I zoom in to the good, while the bad habits run through the mud , All I need is to feel loved.
The questions, the lies running through my mind , think to myself “get in line”.
My mind is ticking , my eyes are flickering , I can’t stop picking , I can’t stop kicking!
If this is how love feels then I don’t want it, don’t need it and can be without it .
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Author:
Nicole Sarah Robinson (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 11th, 2023 18:36
- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this for someone I adore that could never become more .
- Category: Love
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The excitement and the flutters that visited you is very likely authentic as your words jumped w truth about that initial tingle. So you have your part rehearsed and when and if matched w a validity of intention and feeling the unity resulting would excite. The flaw lies with him and there’s not always a method to identify partners that have half hearted approach. I feel ann optimism after the read cuz you stood up w honor and blessed emotion and I salute you for that. I leave you w simple but true words
“One bad apple don’t spoil the whole bunch” yiu are READY to flourish cuz you have the wonderment and splendor alive yiu just proved it. And I salute !!
Thank you
You’re not alone. Please read about my failed attempt.
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-170159
Not read from you in years nicole
Glad to see you still going strong
2nd last verse is dynamite
Like a rap on it's own or a chorus
A fav for me
Great to see you
I know I’m getting back into poetry again, and thank you so much !
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