Loren Ipsum

FallingAwake2

I always felt like your placeholder,

But for me you were the one I loved,

Now you’re the one that got away,

And now I’m left out of place.

  • Author: FallingAwake2 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2023 21:42
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 11
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  • Bobby O

    Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere

    Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different

    • FallingAwake2

      Go home

      • Bobby O

        It’s still just a list w no emotional content or interest to draw in readers. What I said makes sense but I don’t care if you ignore my help.

        • FallingAwake2

          I looked through your page and I don't like your writing style so I'll pass

          • Bobby O

            That is a lie. You’re just being a baby and can’t accept critique. Grow up!

            • FallingAwake2

              Okay

            • vividvoid14

              love your peom keep up the work



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