I always felt like your placeholder,
But for me you were the one I loved,
Now you’re the one that got away,
And now I’m left out of place.
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Author:
FallingAwake2 (
Offline) - Published: August 11th, 2023 21:42
- Category: Love
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Darkness unexpectedly claimed all views from the position you assigned or perhaps designed a placeholder not even next in line but you kept me , my love to share found unaware or worse uncared indifference gifted without a blinking stare as you unmoved denied my dignity clear atmosphere
Say what you feel don’t just list things you wish were different
Go home
It’s still just a list w no emotional content or interest to draw in readers. What I said makes sense but I don’t care if you ignore my help.
I looked through your page and I don't like your writing style so I'll pass
That is a lie. You’re just being a baby and can’t accept critique. Grow up!
Okay
love your peom keep up the work
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