Old Men of Steel

Parisab

Junk or trash, which one to click

Old men, hoard power, tick, tock, tick

 

Beg, borrow, votes they steal

Tone deaf, CEO’s, men of steel

 

Start afresh, and vote for the young to grow

New mistakes, are better than the old B.A.U

  • Author: Parisab (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2023 15:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: The sad affairs of the US politics and the ‘good ol’ world ‘leaders’, who don’t go away!
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments16

  • peto

    Oh you always have me thinking
    If it's any consolation ( doubt it will be)
    It's every bit as bad here in the uk
    We recently had a clown who rugby tackled kids broke his own laws constantly
    And of course they lie constantly
    I'm ashamed to say I didn't even vote last time around
    Be in no rush next time either
    Sorry for going on
    Hit a raw nerve

  • Parisab

    So I hear, I’m not running to the pole to exercise my right… They keep pushing that old agenda that, if this old man doesn’t win, the other old man will win! Is this how it was supposed to be? Thanks for reaching out, Peto….

  • Sunsetmet

    Yes vote for the young to grow new misstates I like that good read

  • Teddy.15

    Wow, I couldn't comment on US politics because I have never lived there, however you do make a very colourful poem which also makes me chuckle the state of politics throughout the world is abysmal right now. There's simply nothing good. Very much appreciated this political.dance dear Parisab. 💖

    • Parisab

      Yes dear Teddy, they’re too old to leave their seats (of power) even if their ego lets them! Universal concept at its core…

    • Parisab

      Glad if you enjoyed Sunset…I May remove the capital on the last stanza, too, inspired by your comment

    • Doggerel Dave

      Yes, yes and yes – number of other B words to describe this phenomenon other than ‘Business’.
      You can add R for Rich to that list of qualities which apparently attach to these leaders.

      • Parisab

        Great observation and decoding of the ‘masterminds’ Thanks for the read…

      • Bobby O

        That’s is exact and the suggestive political fix encouraged is the finger on the pulse needed NEXT!
        Simpatico !

        • Parisab

          Next level Bobby! Thank you for paying attention and the read…

          • Bobby O

            Does every one know how much fun you are?

          • 2 more comments

          • vividvoid14

            amazing poem

            • Parisab

              There’s hope, thanks for the likes of you, Vivid-

            • Neville


              I think you may well have something here ..

              both Britain's Bozo & the US Trump need to be Putin a pot and rendered down into an opaque amorphous paste .. Neville 👍

              • Parisab

                LOL-You are taking us to the land of the scarytale, Neville-These sandmen are scary already-Thanks for your take, as always-

              • L. B. Mek

                I don't know if we can just assume
                the male gene, is at fault
                Hilary Clinton or Kamala Harris or Nicola Sturgeon
                aren't really flying a high flag..
                or the 'age' alone being the problem
                (Justin Trudeau's as just one example
                of how quickly youthful fervour
                can curate a warped dictatorial mindset)
                maybe, its more the 'mindset'
                of the people attracted to power positions
                'in general'
                that needs to be considered..
                and no, i'm not trying to belittle
                the majority male patriarchy legacy
                that's curated most of our problems
                with politics and democracy as a whole
                still, there's something deeper going on
                than assuming getting rid of all the old fellas
                in charge and replacing them with younger or the opposite sex
                would solve our problems...
                look at chicago, san fran, california etc
                failed states who have been doing this for decades
                (voting young and empowering ladies)
                but hey what do i know, still
                love the open discourse
                we need more of this active engagement to take back ownership
                of a political system, supposedly designed
                with us, 'the voters'
                in the power seat... ha!

              • Parisab

                Yes for sure ‘new engagement’ is needed-while gender and age were not my main contention, I’m glad that it looked and quacked like the ‘old men of Steele’ whom have set up the system which all kind of players have to play by its fundamental principals-I’m particularly looking at our possible US presidential contenders, whom both fit the Bill of Wrongs for these times… It’s great to see you back, dear LB Mek

              • Bella Shepard

                I Love this poem, wise words indeed. I look around and don't recognize my country any more. The principles upon which our U.S. was founded have gone by the wayside, and what we have is exactly what you have so succintly described. We need young leaders whose minds are free of corruption, to lead us, it is their future that is at stake. The clock is indeed ticking! Thank you for telling it like it is.

                • Parisab

                  So glad you have your hand on the pulse of our country -thank you for the read Bella Bella -

                • Alex Praw

                  I love it. It is short, accurate and funny. With good rhymes and meaning. It has everything.

                  • Parisab

                    Thank you for the read and kind comments.

                  • Garth Rakumakoe

                    One realizes many a times that it's because the same old faces, and I mean literally old - are are at the helm - that the transformation and evolutionary wheel does not turn. Old politicians refuse to give in. It's the untold leadership pandemic! - Thank you for shining a light on this, dear Poet.

                  • Parisab

                    ‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so brilliantly in three words-a poem title perhaps? Thank you for your wise comments post friend…

                  • Thomas W Case

                    So much corruption, new and old. Great write.



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