His heartbeat gets faster
His pupils dilate
And all cause he asked her
To go on a date
She wanted so badly
To jump at the chance
Her busy life sadly
Devoid of romance
And then there's the distance
A few hundred miles
The natural resistance
Of differing styles
Neither can deny it
These feelings are real
If bottled I'd buy it
Beg borrow or steal
At night when they're sleeping
Two share the one dream
This year is for leaping
And letting of steam
With heads full of wonder
And stomachs in knots
They'll wade through the thunder
To join up the dots
What it will fashion
When push comes to shove
Is an unbridled passion
And beautiful love
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Author:
peto (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Taking a wee break after this one Try some spoken word Thanks for all the encouragement and support It's been priceless
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Great writing especially like these lines
‘This year is for leaping
And letting of steam
With heads full of wonder
And stomachs in knots
They'll wade through the thunder
To join up the dots
What it will fashion
When push comes to shove
Is an unbridled passion
And beautiful love
I like the choice of words
Love those last lines
Ah Violet
Thank you very much
You have read and supported me for some time
Massive appreciation from me to you
Both at once.
An honest chronicle of reaching fir the brass ting and the visualization ir ‘what ifs” that can be real and definitive.
And it’s because he asked her. Proactive behavior encouraged do maybe this is just a cool way to deliver advice?
Nothing ventured nothing gained
You got a way with words I "dig" Bobby
Top man
Glad to have met so to speak
Much obliged
Simpatico
I love it!!! This is so beautifully sad. My kind of poetry. Forbidden or distant love. But hey, looks like a risk was taken; and that's better than wondering what if...maybe you opened a portal for her to get inspired, and give love/romance a chance? Thank you for sharing! ✨️
Risk it for a biscuit
Thank you LIZ
I open up myself if that counts
Extremely grateful for your enthusiastic review
Beautifully sad i take very complimentary
Even your comments are full of feeling
Humbled
❤️❤️❤️❤️ awww thank you! And, yes, it does count!!
I'll miss you.
And I you
Thank you
I will re-read these words while you take your break, you will be missed!! This rhyme scheme is different than your usual. It was quite nice! Nothing better than a romantic poem! It's so sweet! x
Can't stay predictable Christina
I'd get boring
Thank you for favouring for commenting for everything x
Great poem, peto. It reminds me how very grateful I am to have a wonderful friend and lover without any of the encumbrances that your poem outlines. I read your poem twice. I wanted to "user favorite" it but don't know how to do so.
Thank you sir
There is a star at top of page
Between title and poem
Simply press on that
Honoured
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