Heartbreak

Gg_a_poet


Notice of absence from Gg_a_poet
Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you



I don't know how to feel

It's like it's unreal

I tried so hard to be everything

When in reality I was nothing

 

See thats the thing about love

Feels like you're head is so above

In the clouds while the sun rains down

But in the end those heart strings that were bound

Can never be found

 

He's losing interest in me 

With him I felt free

But now my body feels tied down

The demon inside me, barking like a hound

 

My heart shot with words I thought I'd never hear

My heart shattered with a spear 

I stopped eating

I can't stop thinking

 

He said he loved me forever and after

He was in every chapter

But he promised never to leave

Those words are dead to me

 

  • Author: GG (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 14th, 2023 12:53
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 8
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  • Bobby O

    I love the last line. It’s perfect cuz I was drawn in by the situation described and feeling pathos through the journey and wondering a bit if the weight will make it tough for you to see an escape. But WHOA, worry not, that poem finished with proof you will feel but not be defeated cuz you did the perfect move, make it like he don’t matter. Period. Props!

    • Gg_a_poet

      Thank you me and my bf haven\'t broken up but it feels like he is drifting away I wrote this because I\'m starting to feel like it\'s over and he\'d promise he\'d never leave everyone says that but they always leave thats why the words are dead to me

      • Bobby O

        Fuck yeah. The catharsis gained from the Write gives yiu power and that may just be enough to turn it around and get him begging. Nice job.

        • Gg_a_poet

          Thank you ❤

        • Bobby O

          Ooops. I didn’t realize you were so young. Sure can’t tell from your writes. Anyway, im sorry for the profs bc e word. I should be more careful. Please forgive??

          • Gg_a_poet

            Do you mean swearing? I'm 15 I swear a lot I mostly hang out with older people nothing to be sorry about

            • Bobby O

              Dig!



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