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Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
Currently back in school in many extra curricular activity's I will try to make time to write love you
I don't know how to feel
It's like it's unreal
I tried so hard to be everything
When in reality I was nothing
See thats the thing about love
Feels like you're head is so above
In the clouds while the sun rains down
But in the end those heart strings that were bound
Can never be found
He's losing interest in me
With him I felt free
But now my body feels tied down
The demon inside me, barking like a hound
My heart shot with words I thought I'd never hear
My heart shattered with a spear
I stopped eating
I can't stop thinking
He said he loved me forever and after
He was in every chapter
But he promised never to leave
Those words are dead to me
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Author:
GG (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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I love the last line. It’s perfect cuz I was drawn in by the situation described and feeling pathos through the journey and wondering a bit if the weight will make it tough for you to see an escape. But WHOA, worry not, that poem finished with proof you will feel but not be defeated cuz you did the perfect move, make it like he don’t matter. Period. Props!
Thank you me and my bf haven\'t broken up but it feels like he is drifting away I wrote this because I\'m starting to feel like it\'s over and he\'d promise he\'d never leave everyone says that but they always leave thats why the words are dead to me
Fuck yeah. The catharsis gained from the Write gives yiu power and that may just be enough to turn it around and get him begging. Nice job.
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Ooops. I didn’t realize you were so young. Sure can’t tell from your writes. Anyway, im sorry for the profs bc e word. I should be more careful. Please forgive??
Do you mean swearing? I'm 15 I swear a lot I mostly hang out with older people nothing to be sorry about
Dig!
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