While Out Busy Partying
He was not good enough
for her, but she
was far too good for him ..
Yet my how her
bones they did rattle like
a sack filled
with old rusty spanners
or something ..
She had not got one single
ounce of meat
on her, at all but he liked
her like that
and she swore she would
never dare to
get fat and risk losing him ..
Sadly, she passed
recently as he, so they say ..
Was out on
the town busy boozing and
partying and
fucking her cousin the whole
night, clean away ..
For little j always remembered with BIG love and respect ..
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Neville (
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Very strong emotive words Neville.
Andy
and entirely true ..
Good write N.
You know I'm gonna say - KP has no meat on her, but halfa ton of botox! lol. She wants to be put in prison now, is the latest story. Hooray, I say!
It seems you have a KP fixation Mr. O .. nuttier than a shed load of cashews 😎
Uffff!! It's all I got!! 💜
my thought exactly 💜
You sure it wasn't her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable read Neville.
are you sure you are on the right page
i like this write, N! I don't know what a spanner is but I do know what you were doing to her cousin! x
I wasn't doing anything to her cousin other than trying to point out what a bastard her husband was .. and still is
When you gotta go.... Something, perhaps, to be said for being an autonomous independent human being not reliant on another's bullshit....
.............. maybe 👍
“she would never dare……” – dependency issues.
“so they say….” – hearsay.
Fully aware that I’m attempting to teach grandmother to suck eggs, however…….
.......a foul but not uncommon picture never the less.
A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So sad.
Some people are not meant to be together. Too often it ends like this.
Enjoyed your poem. It was stark, and direct to the point. - Phil A.
am glad you got this Phil .. not sure whether git is an understood term in the US but the git was a true git if ever there was ..
My wife is British, and I cannot count how many times she has referred to me as a lazy git. I think it means whatever you want it to mean, only never anything favorable.
This is really good!
thanks for the thumbs up 👍
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