While Out Busy Partying

Neville

While Out Busy Partying

 

He was not good enough

for her, but she

was far too good for him ..

Yet my how her

bones they did rattle like

a sack filled

with old rusty spanners

or something ..

She had not got one single

ounce of meat

on her, at all but he liked

her like that

and she swore she would

never dare to

get fat and risk losing him ..

Sadly, she passed

recently as he, so they say ..

Was out on

the town busy boozing and

partying and

fucking her cousin the whole

night, clean away ..

 

For little j always remembered with BIG love and respect ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2023 01:02
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  • Goldfinch60

    Very strong emotive words Neville.

    Andy

  • Neville



    and entirely true ..

  • orchidee

    Good write N.
    You know I'm gonna say - KP has no meat on her, but halfa ton of botox! lol. She wants to be put in prison now, is the latest story. Hooray, I say!

    • Neville



      It seems you have a KP fixation Mr. O .. nuttier than a shed load of cashews 😎

    • LIZ

      Uffff!! It's all I got!! 💜

      • Neville



        my thought exactly 💜

      • sorenbarrett

        You sure it wasn't her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable read Neville.

        • Neville



          are you sure you are on the right page

        • Christina8

          i like this write, N! I don't know what a spanner is but I do know what you were doing to her cousin! x

          • Neville



            I wasn't doing anything to her cousin other than trying to point out what a bastard her husband was .. and still is

          • Doggerel Dave

            When you gotta go.... Something, perhaps, to be said for being an autonomous independent human being not reliant on another's bullshit....

            • Neville



              .............. maybe 👍

              • Doggerel Dave

                “she would never dare……” – dependency issues.
                “so they say….” – hearsay.
                Fully aware that I’m attempting to teach grandmother to suck eggs, however…….
                .......a foul but not uncommon picture never the less.

              • MendedFences27

                A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So sad.
                Some people are not meant to be together. Too often it ends like this.
                Enjoyed your poem. It was stark, and direct to the point. - Phil A.

                • Neville



                  am glad you got this Phil .. not sure whether git is an understood term in the US but the git was a true git if ever there was ..

                  • MendedFences27

                    My wife is British, and I cannot count how many times she has referred to me as a lazy git. I think it means whatever you want it to mean, only never anything favorable.

                  • Bigguy

                    This is really good!

                    • Neville


                      thanks for the thumbs up 👍



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