Pull the thread - now time to unwind.
As you fall back to the depths of your mind.
Keep tugging the feeling is real.
More layers are starting to peel.
Feet first is how you like to jump in.
Tempted but it feels like you'll win.
Grab another as you get in the groove.
And the next one releases so smooth.
Sensations not easy to match.
Intrusion just as hard to patch.
Take another if you're able to catch.
Patience in comes a new batch.
~Introverted Sage~
©️2023I.S.
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Introverted Sage (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 18th, 2023 02:32
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Very cool.
Thank you!
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
Thank you!
That's how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! 😄
Yes indeed! I'm glad you caught my tune 😏
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
Thank you! So glad I was able to creatively inspire you.. I look forward to reading!!
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