people say that my dreams are not realistic
that chances are i'm not going to make it
being and influencer, putting smiles on your faces
i know where my place is
i wont stop till i place
first that is
i aint playing with no kings
im throwing Aces
i wanna be the best nothing less
go ahead put me to the test
what me go its gone be a show
and if you want some more leave a like. lol
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Author:
nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: hey this is some of my lyrics for a rap if u have any idea how i can improve then leave a commit i hope y'all liked the poem
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Three lines instead??
I know where my place….
Won’t stop till on top
it’s my competitive curse
Weaponized flow that I drop
Podium Gold Place me First
Nev’r rest my Righteous destiny BEST
ride this goat of success
Work Hardest like JB strutting
silky Marvin’s finesse
You can’t just say your gonna be first or good, that’s fine a dozen cliche, provide them the reasons,
thanks man your so helpful
I'm the grandma of the lot, and I don't know rap, but I know a good read when I see one. Your dreams are as real as you want to make them. Just keep plugging along, you'll find your song, and it will be real!
thank you, i really appreciate your words
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