imma make it

vividvoid14

people say that  my dreams are not realistic 

that chances are i'm not going to make it

being and  influencer, putting smiles on your faces 

i know where my place is

i wont stop till i place 

first that is

i aint playing with no kings

im throwing Aces

i wanna be the best nothing less

go ahead put me to the test

what me go its gone be a show

and if you want some more leave a like. lol 

 

 

  • Author: nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 18th, 2023 11:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: hey this is some of my lyrics for a rap if u have any idea how i can improve then leave a commit i hope y'all liked the poem
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  • Bobby O

    Three lines instead??
    I know where my place….
    Won’t stop till on top
    it’s my competitive curse
    Weaponized flow that I drop
    Podium Gold Place me First
    Nev’r rest my Righteous destiny BEST
    ride this goat of success
    Work Hardest like JB strutting
    silky Marvin’s finesse

    You can’t just say your gonna be first or good, that’s fine a dozen cliche, provide them the reasons,

  • vividvoid14

    thanks man your so helpful

  • Bella Shepard

    I'm the grandma of the lot, and I don't know rap, but I know a good read when I see one. Your dreams are as real as you want to make them. Just keep plugging along, you'll find your song, and it will be real!

    • vividvoid14

      thank you, i really appreciate your words



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