I feel the pain of my children
sensing the stress in their voice
they are flesh of my flesh
with their joy I rejoice
knowing the turmoil in their demeanor
I tense with their fears
blood of my blood
I cry their tears
I sense impending strife
The terror of their bed
where their nightmares of life
echos in my head
I quake with troubles they encounter
I cringe with their unvoiced shouts
I'm saddened with their failures
I tremble with their doubts
I cry when their needs go unmet
Their turmoil I retain
I sweat their sweat
though broken from me, they still remain
I can not divorce them
I can see what they can not see
Their feelings are mine
although they reject me
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: August 22nd, 2023 07:38
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments5
Good write SB.
I cannot divorce KP - boohoo! She's got the divorce papers somewhere, but she has locked this ball and chain on my leg, and thrown away the key. What mad adventures KP and I have! lol.
If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you won't have to have an automatic ball return. Thanks for the review Orchi
No matter how old they are, the tug of the heart string that connects them to you is unbreakable, expressed so beautifully in this poem. This one is very special, thank you.
Thanks so much Bella for your review and understanding kind comments they are wo welcome
So very true soren, our children are our life.
Andy
Thank you Andy I so appreciate your review.
even reading your relationship disharmony, hopefully only momentary
is it wrong
I'm still jealous, you've been granted
the wondrous privilege of parenthood...
not all of us are so lucky my wise friend
remember that, next time you sigh
🍻
Thank you L.B. for your most encouraging words. It is true my children have always brought me joy along with the concerns and sadness. They are what I leave behind my wise friend.
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