Flash! A bright & grey light -
From a device most precise;
'Tis, this thing: "A beast?!"
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HoboBilbo (
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Flash! A bright & grey light -
From a device most precise;
'Tis, this thing: "A beast?!"
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Write a real piece that shows a side of your personality. Haiku is cool but is a limited vehicle to display personality
I appreciate the feedback!
Could also try some information on your home page - tell something about yourself.
PS Never been faved by anyone before let alone by a stranger. How much of my stuff do you know?
And to save you the effort, I don't do cyber friendships either ....
I haven't read much of your stuff, but every poem of yours made me laugh and/or smirk, chuckle, etc. I - up until recently because I chose to watch an overly absurd British comedy from the 80s - haven't been much of a laugher the last five years. I also enjoy your personality.
And don't worry about being cyber friends. I forget how to talk to people; relations with me quickly dry.
Ok - accepted.
Now get something up on your home page, please. We know much about the really great poets - so why should you be different - and don't pull that " by my works shall you know me" crap on me, it won't wash.😂
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